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slaves in the cell
Quiet bounces off white walls
of fresh paint
Crow bars scrape the cold silky
stone
Sniffles from slaves in this cell
and sticky fingers of feeling
Where is the exit?
Can we even escape?
Sit, ponder, sigh, hesitate
Tick! Tick! Tock!
So much time
Can we make it out ---
alive?
try
of fresh paint
Crow bars scrape the cold silky
stone
Sniffles from slaves in this cell
and sticky fingers of feeling
Where is the exit?
Can we even escape?
Sit, ponder, sigh, hesitate
Tick! Tick! Tock!
So much time
Can we make it out ---
alive?
try
Published 26th Nov 2009
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26th Nov 2009 9:30pm
First poem I've read, and I'm already impressed! Love the composition and the message, really love the ending ^^
