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My heart
My soul has a hole in it.
It can't take any more pain or loneness.
I want you to see me but not the outside.
The inside where no one has been in to see.
Look deep into my eyes and you will see the pain ,
hurt, betrayal left by many guys.
You say you want me but you have no idea to whom i am.
You say you want me but my body is tired.
My heart is dead.
Hope is nowhere.
Love is unreal.
And I'm on the ground on my knees looking to the sky.
Why must one go through pain to have happiness
It can't take any more pain or loneness.
I want you to see me but not the outside.
The inside where no one has been in to see.
Look deep into my eyes and you will see the pain ,
hurt, betrayal left by many guys.
You say you want me but you have no idea to whom i am.
You say you want me but my body is tired.
My heart is dead.
Hope is nowhere.
Love is unreal.
And I'm on the ground on my knees looking to the sky.
Why must one go through pain to have happiness
Published 8th Jul 2011
| Edited 26th Sep 2012
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8th Jul 2011 6:01am
If its prose you should write in complete sentances. You should check grammar before you post. If it's a poem you should break up the lines, and add something to give it a concrete beginning and ending. What does this have to do with life? Connect it to the title or change it. Be mindful of cliches, there are alot of them here. I would suggest rewording your feelings. I see pain but I can't feel it
8th Jul 2011 7:56am
