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Dire
Despair is grasping at belief,
Yearning for all-evasive relief.
Tangled lies fill your head.
Since diapers, yes, been spoon.
Blood crusades to validate,
for there is no waiting on the hate.
Mad free-for-all is the race,
and truth the casualty we face.
Distorted minds deluding to know;
Masks on, welcome to the show
Enjoy the lies from all the spies,
while reason remains absent of whys.
The followers feeding fools their power
As the slaves await the witching hour.
Light speed now must push the rhyme,
so you lose your mind and the time.
Copyrights Michael J. Kucera 2016
Yearning for all-evasive relief.
Tangled lies fill your head.
Since diapers, yes, been spoon.
Blood crusades to validate,
for there is no waiting on the hate.
Mad free-for-all is the race,
and truth the casualty we face.
Distorted minds deluding to know;
Masks on, welcome to the show
Enjoy the lies from all the spies,
while reason remains absent of whys.
The followers feeding fools their power
As the slaves await the witching hour.
Light speed now must push the rhyme,
so you lose your mind and the time.
Copyrights Michael J. Kucera 2016
Published 13th Apr 2016
| Edited 16th Apr 2016
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13th Apr 2016 8:27am
14th Apr 2016 5:09pm
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
23rd Apr 2016 5:43am
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23rd Apr 2016 7:05am
this is just one I mentioned where I intentionally used no punctuation..lol..sure truth exists but it's SUBJECTIVE other than a few universal truths that govern us all as mortal beings on this rock spinning in space..lol...
A really kinda weird thing about this piece is when I wrote it I thought I meant something totally different but a girl commented on it on another site and sent me a link to Jesus rebuking the HYPOCRITES of all things..lol..and told me how similar it was but a modern day version..of course me the skeptic was like whatever okay I'll check out the link..lol..and much to my chagrin...it was almost word for word except mine is written in more modern language obviously...again made me stop to ponder..did I write this?....or is it just me EGO telling me I did?...or was it written through me...to say the least it was compelling...TY A for reading and your kind words and questions...hope it baffled you a bit..lol.....and I see the world from totality too..maybe you do as well..I've found it rare...so it's sort of a take on where I see US as humanity written with really tight rhyme, etc...not something I normally take much time on..I just spit it..lol..but in this case I did take a bit of extra time to make sure it flowed as seamlessly as possible...peace out...gnite
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A really kinda weird thing about this piece is when I wrote it I thought I meant something totally different but a girl commented on it on another site and sent me a link to Jesus rebuking the HYPOCRITES of all things..lol..and told me how similar it was but a modern day version..of course me the skeptic was like whatever okay I'll check out the link..lol..and much to my chagrin...it was almost word for word except mine is written in more modern language obviously...again made me stop to ponder..did I write this?....or is it just me EGO telling me I did?...or was it written through me...to say the least it was compelling...TY A for reading and your kind words and questions...hope it baffled you a bit..lol.....and I see the world from totality too..maybe you do as well..I've found it rare...so it's sort of a take on where I see US as humanity written with really tight rhyme, etc...not something I normally take much time on..I just spit it..lol..but in this case I did take a bit of extra time to make sure it flowed as seamlessly as possible...peace out...gnite
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Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
23rd Apr 2016 7:25am
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28th Apr 2016 12:52pm
you are so cool:)..yes what Buddha called the net of jewels...and that there is indeed a collective consciousness and all is connected on the most subtle levels...that was just another cool phrase that bounced through my brain...which as you said could come from that place of shared knowledge, which would explain why I often feel I am being written through more than actually writing myself....and other writers have expressed the same feeling to me..because at first I wasn't sure if it was just the weed..lol...hallucinogen..I smoke a lot...it keeps the demons away for me and magnifies all things creative..only drawback is occasional anxiety or paranoia but that's mind over matter also at a certain point...GREAT COMMENT A...ty...greets back at ya
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