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THE PAINTING
The girl stood,
Not very tall
Staring at something,
A painting on the wall
The painting hung,
Not very high
Smiling at someone,
A girl, quite shy.
The girl’s lips had
The smile of the painting
The painting caught
The eyes of the girl
The painter stopped
And smiled at both
As either side the glass
Each child of his was satisfied
Published 31st Mar 2016
| Edited 2nd Apr 2016
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31st Mar 2016 8:17pm
Looks like the artist's girl saw the artist's picture, perhaps painted with her in mind.
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10th Oct 2016 12:57pm
Many thanks for the nice comment. I think many poets love art and also the other way round.
