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Please wake me
Please wake me
Out cold in never,never land;
A cold chill takes to my spine,
As a drift of blown wind collides in my mind.
Shattering glass takes to my sense;
As a sent of sick takes to my presence.
Horrored mind and twisted dreams,coming to light as dark shadows fade and thee wicked arrive's at the gate!
Hate driven,with Insain riddance;
The arrival of the masked atire.
Mother cries ,held by her fait,twisting and turning trying to get away.
Reaching for a spare of life,but as so many times before;
I just,DONT HAVE A GUN!
©All rights reserved Writen for DU competition I DONT HAVE A GUN!!
DEDICATED to the men woman and children who lost there lives to Americas spread of hypocratcy in Iraq and my only nightmare that has not came to light yet. At least with my presant vessel. R. I. P. Civilians of Iraq and Afghan alongside of those brave men who faught back against the most cowardly of machines ever. R. I. P.
Out cold in never,never land;
A cold chill takes to my spine,
As a drift of blown wind collides in my mind.
Shattering glass takes to my sense;
As a sent of sick takes to my presence.
Horrored mind and twisted dreams,coming to light as dark shadows fade and thee wicked arrive's at the gate!
Hate driven,with Insain riddance;
The arrival of the masked atire.
Mother cries ,held by her fait,twisting and turning trying to get away.
Reaching for a spare of life,but as so many times before;
I just,DONT HAVE A GUN!
©All rights reserved Writen for DU competition I DONT HAVE A GUN!!
DEDICATED to the men woman and children who lost there lives to Americas spread of hypocratcy in Iraq and my only nightmare that has not came to light yet. At least with my presant vessel. R. I. P. Civilians of Iraq and Afghan alongside of those brave men who faught back against the most cowardly of machines ever. R. I. P.
Published 23rd Mar 2016
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25th Mar 2016 1:27pm
well put and very current - need to add Syria to the list and the hypocratcy is not just Americas we can also include here in the UK and most of the countries in Europe and of course Russia
good Ink
good Ink
26th Mar 2016 5:02am
Thank you man. Ya it's unbelievable when it comes to the hate and evil involved in the wars going on. Real messed up. I originally tryed my shot on the comp I don't have a gun didn't win though lol. Thanks though for truth.
26th Mar 2016 5:06am
Deus ex machina?? God as a machine, God as metal. The write is like a metal stream of consciousness.
26th Mar 2016 5:18am
26th Mar 2016 5:49am
Seriously, for some reason how you word your poems makes me think of some German thrash metal lyrics, which I love, but also as far as stream of consciousness, you're writing as it comes to you, not overthinking it. That's a good thing. That's why I said metal stream of consciousness.
27th Mar 2016 3:28am
Thanks and I read the a whole wikipiedi article based on the phrase deus ex machina. Didn't know how to take it at first with the first few definitions but the latter definitions hit the spot. Thanks for your most interesting comments. Really.
27th Mar 2016 5:27am
