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The wait
The Wait
He waits to here and see you. My mind wondering twitching with emotions.
A twitch wich I can not resist or stop.One twitch every time I wonder of her beutifull self. Another undeniable twich every time I see a photo of her. A twitch everytime I sy her name in my mind followed by a twitch everytime I grab my phone looking to here her voice.
A hatred to his mind as time is consumed and he here's no ring. But that twitch here and that witch there keeps the heart going through the light and night wondering over loves way.🤔🤔😥🙃😊
© Pending Uncle Slam
He waits to here and see you. My mind wondering twitching with emotions.
A twitch wich I can not resist or stop.One twitch every time I wonder of her beutifull self. Another undeniable twich every time I see a photo of her. A twitch everytime I sy her name in my mind followed by a twitch everytime I grab my phone looking to here her voice.
A hatred to his mind as time is consumed and he here's no ring. But that twitch here and that witch there keeps the heart going through the light and night wondering over loves way.🤔🤔😥🙃😊
© Pending Uncle Slam
Published 5th Mar 2016
| Edited 21st Sep 2016
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6th Mar 2016 2:37pm
this is good the idea behind it i really like - The twitch' - but you've got to watch your spelling and wording - some critics can be unkind - luckily enough not many on deep underground - I am not very good at spelling and have a friend help me :-)
6th Mar 2016 10:43pm
Thanks for the honesty. Lol in Colledge but still got them first generation artifacts at play. Lol but as to the wording I kept it simple as I freestyled this one in abought five minutes. Just wrote lol. By way peep out that comp to make or break four letter challenge I think you'll like it My forum. Thanks again man.
