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so tragically
Feel like I'm drowning and noone around me can see
Feel like my life's going by so pointlessly
Trying to run from what I don't want to be
Failing so helplessly
Don't feel good enough being all I can be
Life's tasks are done so thanklessly
Feel like I'm dieing all alone only me
Mourn my words so tragically
I hope you can open your eyes so you're mind starts to see
Learn to accept the world so openly
Feel like my life's going by so pointlessly
Trying to run from what I don't want to be
Failing so helplessly
Don't feel good enough being all I can be
Life's tasks are done so thanklessly
Feel like I'm dieing all alone only me
Mourn my words so tragically
I hope you can open your eyes so you're mind starts to see
Learn to accept the world so openly
Published 4th Mar 2016
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4th Mar 2016 2:59pm
Beautifully written...enjoyed the flow of this piece. I always say you and I are somewhat kindred spirits a lot of what youberitr I feel like you're writing from my life. Thanks for sharing
4th Mar 2016 3:11pm
Miss that means so much and it's so good to have some1 who can feel what I'm feeling thru wat I'm writing thanks for commenting x
