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Little Minds Lechery
In sinful paradoxical sleep
Eyes alive,
Sharp as demon sight
One breast exposed
Supple for sucking,
Vulnerability measured
Unaware nightmares comatose slumber,
Lips taste like no
Conducting orchestrated fingers
Play symphonies of nirvana,
Digress in REM
Stir with desire
For little minds scheme
Throwing...fire....on the fire.
Attentions begotten
What morrow conscience
Will deem as rotten
Pleasurable connections
All but forgotten,
Something sick within
Loves you pretty, dirty, and used
Perhaps overwhelming drink
And your sexpot beauty, triggers,
Believe by endulgence time
Sexy spirits highly abused.
Eyes alive,
Sharp as demon sight
One breast exposed
Supple for sucking,
Vulnerability measured
Unaware nightmares comatose slumber,
Lips taste like no
Conducting orchestrated fingers
Play symphonies of nirvana,
Digress in REM
Stir with desire
For little minds scheme
Throwing...fire....on the fire.
Attentions begotten
What morrow conscience
Will deem as rotten
Pleasurable connections
All but forgotten,
Something sick within
Loves you pretty, dirty, and used
Perhaps overwhelming drink
And your sexpot beauty, triggers,
Believe by endulgence time
Sexy spirits highly abused.
Published 26th Feb 2016
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26th Feb 2016 6:08pm
The imagery is fantastic LOVED IT
but am a little confused S1 is dreaming i think...and S2 a guilt trip ?
IMO you only feel guilty if caught lol...otherwise why feel guilt at all, its how others judge you that make you feel that way, an they got no right
:)
but am a little confused S1 is dreaming i think...and S2 a guilt trip ?
IMO you only feel guilty if caught lol...otherwise why feel guilt at all, its how others judge you that make you feel that way, an they got no right
:)
26th Feb 2016 7:52pm
It's my midnight conquests intoxicated taking advantage of the intoxicated. Something in me feeds off the forceable lust of my sloppy drunk woman lol. No shame can come from others only that of my wife and she's yet to be ashamed. It is goodness of subconscious that questions actions and excuses. Hopefully one of these writes I won't leave you in confusion but what you or the reader interpret is the opinion I enjoy hearing.
27th Feb 2016 7:14am
actually now you said it am kicking meself...DOH !!...I sooo should of seen that pffft
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28th Feb 2016 6:02am
Solid poem etro, I like the abstract erotic, and this is a great example of you conveying a complex emotional situation, hot pleasure with a dash of intoxicated guilt. Haven't we all been there?
29th Feb 2016 6:59pm
Thank you Franko. I appreciate the recognition and will return the favor.
25th Feb 2024 6:33am
