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Making Goodnight
The day is done...
and I curl into his quiet..
Held close in his lap and soothed serene..
As i nuzzle head to heart ..
Manly chest beats his calm countenance lullaby...
We rock our peace of home...
He leads me to our bed..
Undresses me slowly there..
While looked at lovingly..
.....by gentle searching....
Hands that touch my aches to ease
That caress me light to flame...
Candle flicks reflect the mood ..
Soft music and the nights whisper..
.....forever my darling..
Said with a sacred kiss ...
...and slow starts our love make.....
He is hugged tight in a white thigh embrace..
As gentle he glides inside..
Our want in sweet rhythm..
Hips return each others desire..
...in deep penetration of souls..
My hands knead strong Man..
and How his stroke finds my moan..
...arches hard as he spills...
Echoes of the day into me...
and I curl into his quiet..
Held close in his lap and soothed serene..
As i nuzzle head to heart ..
Manly chest beats his calm countenance lullaby...
We rock our peace of home...
He leads me to our bed..
Undresses me slowly there..
While looked at lovingly..
.....by gentle searching....
Hands that touch my aches to ease
That caress me light to flame...
Candle flicks reflect the mood ..
Soft music and the nights whisper..
.....forever my darling..
Said with a sacred kiss ...
...and slow starts our love make.....
He is hugged tight in a white thigh embrace..
As gentle he glides inside..
Our want in sweet rhythm..
Hips return each others desire..
...in deep penetration of souls..
My hands knead strong Man..
and How his stroke finds my moan..
...arches hard as he spills...
Echoes of the day into me...
Written by
calamitygin
(Jennifer Michael McCurry)
Published 10th Feb 2016
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Re. Making Goodnight
10th Feb 2016 3:24pm
So well written and sexy Jen. You have come into your own in the last little while and I applaud you. Bravo!!
Lots of love out to you
John
Lots of love out to you
John
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Re: Re. Making Goodnight
10th Feb 2016 3:38pm
Well thank you my sweetie..means so very much to me...yours I read was very good too...heart pulled...
love you dear..
jennifer
love you dear..
jennifer
Re. Making Goodnight
10th Feb 2016 6:30pm
Honey this is smoldering passion which brings me home. I loved reading this. And that last line was perfect. Just how love should be. Filled with the warmth of touch and healing words. ;)
Love ya so much,
John
Love ya so much,
John
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Re: Re. Making Goodnight
10th Feb 2016 6:57pm
Yes. Perfectly willing to heal or absorb the others pain....I love you that much.
im so happy you enjoyed this...
I love you John...
im so happy you enjoyed this...
I love you John...
Re. Making Goodnight
10th Feb 2016 10:29pm
Re: Re. Making Goodnight
11th Feb 2016 3:18am
thank you darlin...and thanks for becumming a regular! i need to get off my duff and return the kind favor...
i have read you before and enjoyed...must again..
love
j
i have read you before and enjoyed...must again..
love
j
Re. Making Goodnight
Ever hear Stephen Foster's "Beautiful Dreamer"? Your poem reminded me of that song which should be your two guys' theme song.
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Re: Re. Making Goodnight
11th Feb 2016 3:19am
awe...love that...yes. i know it...very sweet Candy Man..
thank you very much...
love
j
thank you very much...
love
j
Re. Making Goodnight
11th Feb 2016 00:49am
Jen, this is truly one of my favorites. The reason being that it has such a gentle nature. It flows so effortlessly.
I especially enjoyed the euphony :
"Said with a sacred kiss ...
...and slow starts our love make.....
He is hugged tight in a white thigh embrace..
As gentle he glides inside.. "
The use of the 'S', 'TH', and 'WH' sounds brings a softness to the refrain.
Very nice, and dreamy
I especially enjoyed the euphony :
"Said with a sacred kiss ...
...and slow starts our love make.....
He is hugged tight in a white thigh embrace..
As gentle he glides inside.. "
The use of the 'S', 'TH', and 'WH' sounds brings a softness to the refrain.
Very nice, and dreamy
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Re: Re. Making Goodnight
11th Feb 2016 3:22am
it was written right as i woke...had fallen sweet asleep with these in mind...
and it all xame out before i was wide.
so dreamy i am sure and a glad effect ..
i look forward to goodnight with him..
thank you very much...muuagh!
love
j
and it all xame out before i was wide.
so dreamy i am sure and a glad effect ..
i look forward to goodnight with him..
thank you very much...muuagh!
love
j
Re. Making Goodnight
11th Feb 2016 5:17am
Lovely and romantic Jen such a tender sweet write. You are so expressive in these things.
Luv & hugz sweet lady,
Tony
Luv & hugz sweet lady,
Tony
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11th Feb 2016 6:59am
Re. Making Goodnight
12th Feb 2016 1:39pm
Re. Making Goodnight
12th Feb 2016 6:08pm
Re: Re. Making Goodnight
12th Feb 2016 6:24pm
Hi my sweetie pie! Thank you Glen...always so tickled to see you doll..
love you
jen
love you
jen
Re: Re. Making Goodnight
12th Feb 2016 6:24pm
Hi my sweetie pie! Thank you Glen...always so tickled to see you doll..
love you
jen
love you
jen
Re. Making Goodnight
16th Feb 2016 7:45pm