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Fuck You, Goodbye
Sticking my ghostly fingers into my heart hoping to disappear
My mistake thinking you were the broken one but it's been me this whole time
Twist my thick hair around the spike in my head and bury me in the night
I've lived too long in your lies losing my mind feeling the pain
I have fed you life, easy, while you've been eating the living dead
Sitting on my dreams until my lungs felt like cement
I loved for something and you've killed me for the last time
My mistake thinking you were the broken one but it's been me this whole time
Twist my thick hair around the spike in my head and bury me in the night
I've lived too long in your lies losing my mind feeling the pain
I have fed you life, easy, while you've been eating the living dead
Sitting on my dreams until my lungs felt like cement
I loved for something and you've killed me for the last time
Published 31st Jan 2016
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31st Jan 2016 10:59pm
1st Feb 2016 3:07am
Ahhh ., . . But still we come back for more and more.
We keep hoping that this time will be the best time.
It never is, is it?
We keep hoping that this time will be the best time.
It never is, is it?
1st Feb 2016 3:09am
Exactly standingmyground,
I'm not sure why we ever expect change!
Thanks for reading 😊
I'm not sure why we ever expect change!
Thanks for reading 😊
1st Feb 2016 3:18am
1st Feb 2016 4:10am
2nd Feb 2016 6:53pm
"Twist my thick hair around the spike in my head and bury me in the night
I've lived too long in your lies losing my mind feeling the pain
I have fed you life, easy, while you've been eating the living dead"
Ah tommie, I can relate to you on this
one at every point made - most of us
on here probably can - and feel your
disappointment and anger.
I love how words when arranged rightly
can paint emotions and life considerably,
and the above lines that I copied/pasted
really stuck-out to me.
Really like this one - but at the same
time I hope that you recover and feel
better... Pan
I've lived too long in your lies losing my mind feeling the pain
I have fed you life, easy, while you've been eating the living dead"
Ah tommie, I can relate to you on this
one at every point made - most of us
on here probably can - and feel your
disappointment and anger.
I love how words when arranged rightly
can paint emotions and life considerably,
and the above lines that I copied/pasted
really stuck-out to me.
Really like this one - but at the same
time I hope that you recover and feel
better... Pan
2nd Feb 2016 7:26pm
Pan,
Some people are so miserable that their actions are intentional. Purposely driving other's away. I have and always will own up to my own "shit", that's why it's so hard to understand why some people are ok with hurting other's!
I know I'm not the only one that feels this. And I'm not glad you understand it because it sucks, but I'm happy you feel me....I hope you can move on from it as well. Thank you SO much for your wonderful comment, I appreciate it deeply! 😊
Some people are so miserable that their actions are intentional. Purposely driving other's away. I have and always will own up to my own "shit", that's why it's so hard to understand why some people are ok with hurting other's!
I know I'm not the only one that feels this. And I'm not glad you understand it because it sucks, but I'm happy you feel me....I hope you can move on from it as well. Thank you SO much for your wonderful comment, I appreciate it deeply! 😊
