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broken
broken to pieces like glass on the floor
broken and scattered like mirror on wall
my heart is bruised
my heart been stomped
my eyes have cried
my eyes seen lust
i felt betrayed
i felt mislead
i lay on my bed
broken in pain
broken and scattered like mirror on wall
my heart is bruised
my heart been stomped
my eyes have cried
my eyes seen lust
i felt betrayed
i felt mislead
i lay on my bed
broken in pain
Published 17th Jan 2016
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- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am
17th Jan 2016 3:01am
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17th Jan 2016 5:54am
17th Jan 2016 3:35am
Agreed the pain flows off this poem. This is a hurtful poem that can be recovered from and I hope it does.
I know this place...
Yes... ouch!
Good write...
Oh... thanks for the follow...
:-)
Yes... ouch!
Good write...
Oh... thanks for the follow...
:-)
17th Jan 2016 5:53am
19th Jan 2016 2:02am
This is one of those pieces where the reader can truly feel the poet's pain.....it slices soul deep!!!
Well written with honesty of emotion expressed....
Well written with honesty of emotion expressed....
