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skinflint lover
as the wind broke into storm
my heart that fitted to break
only your fire could keep me warm
sudden tears that vexed the lake.
i chained up your love for another
making sure you were all mine
in my love you shall smother
but im sure you will feel no pain, you'll be fine.
but even Abraham's bosom, you are not at rest
as in a venomous kiss i shall join you forever
now love is finally put to test
something a heart shall endeavor.
knowing that it's not just me who loves you
it makes me think if you were really worth the while
im knowing now what being jealous can do
still falling for an angels smile.
my heart that fitted to break
only your fire could keep me warm
sudden tears that vexed the lake.
i chained up your love for another
making sure you were all mine
in my love you shall smother
but im sure you will feel no pain, you'll be fine.
but even Abraham's bosom, you are not at rest
as in a venomous kiss i shall join you forever
now love is finally put to test
something a heart shall endeavor.
knowing that it's not just me who loves you
it makes me think if you were really worth the while
im knowing now what being jealous can do
still falling for an angels smile.
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awwwwhz
25th Jun 2011 6:05pm
i take it the poem is bout me and that i broke your heart,again :( im sorry dudette.....i really am...you were there for me from the beginning and i appreciate you trmendously. I lovez you dude :,( todays my last time on DUP probaly forever
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re: awwwwhz
25th Jun 2011 6:15pm
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25th Jun 2011 6:18pm
-sigh- fine,good bye forever then. Since its my last time on here you wont be able to know if i succeed or not. Byebye queen of night
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25th Jun 2011 6:23pm
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25th Jun 2011 6:27pm
well what the hell do you want me to say? im not gonna kill myself? ha thats a lie,i'm gonna attempt until something or somebody changes my mind. Yeah i know my cutting and attempts hurt others but lifes a bitch and they all hurt me too. I cant talk to you cuz you dont have a ohone,i cant get on a computer cuz im on suicide watch,so not to be an ass but yeah its my last time and if i do kill myself you wont know unless somebody haz the balls to post it on here and rememebr me,i highly doubt anyone cares enough too but hell you never know.
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25th Jun 2011 6:30pm
well if i was ever gonna kill myself i wudn't want people to know- i have already lost i lot of people this year but y'know i don't cry about it i just pay my respects and if you leave you have already died in my heart anyway
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25th Jun 2011 6:32pm
great so now im already dead,wonderful. Id want people to know so theyd know my desicion instead of wondering why i havent texted or called or talked to them. But if im dead to you it doesnt matter if i die anymore now does it?
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25th Jun 2011 6:36pm
ive' tried to talk you out of killing yourself but you have abused my trust - when you abuse my trust you are lifeless soul
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25th Jun 2011 6:38pm
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25th Jun 2011 6:40pm
yeah i thought so- couldn't deny you abused my trust so now your going to kill yourself- and let me guess it's about me
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25th Jun 2011 6:44pm
never denied it,i broke your trust,i ignored you pleas to not do it,i said fuck you all. I accept full responcibility for my actions,im not gonna say its because of you,thats just stupid and i wouldnt give you the satisfaction of killing a friend/almost lover
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25th Jun 2011 6:46pm
lets face it benji all i ever was to you was a flirt and nothing else but i guess im a sucker for love
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25th Jun 2011 6:50pm
no,if i wanted a flirt id....never mind im not gonna say it. I did love you,i did alot but i didnt feel like you loved me back so i gave up and moved. If anybody is a sucker for love here its me,i fall in love with eeevry body no matter what they do to ne.
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25th Jun 2011 6:51pm
i did love you back but you just got lost it thats all- it's like you almost drowned in it , now do you see what the poem is all about?
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25th Jun 2011 6:57pm
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25th Jun 2011 6:59pm
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25th Jun 2011 7:05pm
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25th Jun 2011 7:07pm
but you should know how much your tearing me apart...but i know there is nothing i can do about..but there is one last thing you can do before you leave and that is private message me?
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25th Jun 2011 7:09pm
go ahead and message me,i'll be out for awhile i have to go to the mall. i need items.....i'll wait to see if i kill myself or not theres something i must do,but sure message me
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Powerful...
13th Jan 2012 3:55pm
This piece clearly shows passion and love and depth in which to keep love to ones self. very deep powerful write here. Love it:)
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