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who are you really hurting?

with your suicidal ways
taking your life so early; can't bring back lost days
you talk about what always hurts, and complain
do realize i'll never see your face again?

you might think people don't care, im sure they do
you have no true experience to pain, you have no clue
so many people fighting for life but you want to be taken
i hope this has opened your eyes your respect shall awaken

please live life to the full and wait for your true end
think of all the good times, each one valued - good time to spend
i know i don't control you, but i thought i would have my say
because i know my friend would do anything, just to be here today.
Written by 666gothchick (Paulina Dionne)
Published | Edited 29th Jun 2011
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