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A la mierda el amor ...
...A la mierda el amor,
y todo
esas mariposas,
y "envíos cielo '
los rumores
finales felices...
Done with these
feelings of opened
heart, heavy breathing,
rapid beating, seeing
a new beginning...
I Don't toke the 'pipe'
so why'd I keep 'dreaming?'
tired of this wretched soul
in need of needing...
now's time, I'm retreating...
A la mierda el amor,
y todo lo que es "pelusa
y circunstancia "no
Ya voy a hacer que la danza...
Been a fool for so long
never a clue, alone...
in my dark...
is where I clearly belong...
Joder amor, sí ... la mierda
hasta luego, no más ...
done, finished...
of that, I'm certain for sure!
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Re. A la mierda el amor ...
14th Jan 2016 10:30pm
Wow Rich! I'm feeling this ink! First part of healing is acceptance. Love the way you acknowledge your heart's frustration.
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"I Don't toke the 'pipe'
so why'd I keep 'dreaming?'
tired of this wretched soul
in need of needing...
now's time, I'm retreating..."<-- wordplay was dope!
Really love the Spanish vibe in spurts too. Really enjoyed! Pen love~
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"I Don't toke the 'pipe'
so why'd I keep 'dreaming?'
tired of this wretched soul
in need of needing...
now's time, I'm retreating..."<-- wordplay was dope!
Really love the Spanish vibe in spurts too. Really enjoyed! Pen love~
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Re: Re. A la mierda el amor ...
15th Jan 2016 00:42am
Thank you Tara, you're always so wonderfully supportive n I appreciate it always :)
Re. A la mierda el amor ...
Anonymous
15th Jan 2016 4:05am
I think the older I get, the more I come accross people who think and feel along these lines. I feel less alone now
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Re: Re. A la mierda el amor ...
15th Jan 2016 5:40am
Re. A la mierda el amor ...
15th Jan 2016 6:26pm
Excellent Heartfelt Ink Poetik..i can relate on many many levels..enjoyed as always!!
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Re: Re. A la mierda el amor ...
15th Jan 2016 6:37pm
Re. A la mierda el amor ...
16th Jan 2016 3:12am
Sometimes we are way too hard with ourselves for missteps in relationships but recognition is always a good start
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Re: Re. A la mierda el amor ...
16th Jan 2016 11:02pm
Re. A la mierda el amor ...
17th Jan 2016 4:30pm
Sorry I didn't see this in the updates. It's a beautiful but sad write :( I wish I knew Spanish lol
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Re: Re. A la mierda el amor ...
18th Jan 2016 00:32am
Well the Spanish here was mostly repetitive Swearing lol do no worries
BUT if u have a translator on ur phone
It will reveal what you haven't gotten
yet... Thank you for the thoughts n support, truly grateful for your support :)
BUT if u have a translator on ur phone
It will reveal what you haven't gotten
yet... Thank you for the thoughts n support, truly grateful for your support :)
Re. A la mierda el amor ...
21st Jan 2016 11:33am
Ahhh, Erotic Ninja, luv ~ :-*
I came and read this when first you posted it, I confess it. And then, I went away, quietly, again. I came once again and read it and stole away once more. Now, here I am a third time. So, I say to you these things, luv:
This is an absolutely agonizing piece. And, further, doggone your blasted hide, tis beyond lucent.
You know, my aunt said to me once when I told her of a teacher at school going on and on about his detestation for the state of marriage and how he'd never marry again after his divorce - how evil his ex-wife was, et cetera, that the ones who said that were the ones to marry again the fastest. I listened to her words with no small degree of skepticism (I was in high school, after all, and quite young). Within the year, he had remarried and was blissfully content. I believe they are still married to this day.
The ending of your poem reminds me of this teacher and his adamance, luv. ;-p
I came and read this when first you posted it, I confess it. And then, I went away, quietly, again. I came once again and read it and stole away once more. Now, here I am a third time. So, I say to you these things, luv:
This is an absolutely agonizing piece. And, further, doggone your blasted hide, tis beyond lucent.
You know, my aunt said to me once when I told her of a teacher at school going on and on about his detestation for the state of marriage and how he'd never marry again after his divorce - how evil his ex-wife was, et cetera, that the ones who said that were the ones to marry again the fastest. I listened to her words with no small degree of skepticism (I was in high school, after all, and quite young). Within the year, he had remarried and was blissfully content. I believe they are still married to this day.
The ending of your poem reminds me of this teacher and his adamance, luv. ;-p
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Re: Re. A la mierda el amor ...
21st Jan 2016 1:16pm
Funny enough I've known many
especially within my own family, who think n feel like this... I've seen plenty
who like the teacher u mentioned have
bern ok til they married, then... smh
Anyways, big thanks, ur thoughts are priceless to me sweetness :)
especially within my own family, who think n feel like this... I've seen plenty
who like the teacher u mentioned have
bern ok til they married, then... smh
Anyways, big thanks, ur thoughts are priceless to me sweetness :)
Re. A la mierda el amor ...
16th Feb 2016 10:54am
HEY POETIKMIND..
I liked your poem.. me gusto mucho,
especialmente la tengo, algunas criticas positivas, bueno no lo se.
a poem in spanish and english, is always sexy, is like when i read one in sweedish, and finnish, or french, and english..
LOVE,,,, I WILL KEEP SAYING IT,,,,, IS LIKE FRIENDSHIP,,, IS SO CIRCUMSTANTIAL. what it means, is that
for cincumstancy, of life, we met, we got to be friend, we had sex, we fall in love, we had children, we stayed together,
but is twis in the other way, too, for cincunstancies of life, we broke, we hate,... what are those circunstancies__???
WE MET IN DUP. THATS ONE....now we can be friend, or enemy.. or lover. you know what i mean.
son ocaciones circunstanciales... A LA MIERDA EL AMOR. i respect you..mean while i will still use love as tool, like they used it with you, with me. and other.
A la mierda el amor,
y todo lo que es "pelusa
y circunstancia "no
Ya voy a hacer que la danza...
i feel you... thats the way it goes. brother like your poem...
love is a beauty that feeds from sadness...
is one of my poem. hope you like it.
nice spanish.
SENA
I liked your poem.. me gusto mucho,
especialmente la tengo, algunas criticas positivas, bueno no lo se.
a poem in spanish and english, is always sexy, is like when i read one in sweedish, and finnish, or french, and english..
LOVE,,,, I WILL KEEP SAYING IT,,,,, IS LIKE FRIENDSHIP,,, IS SO CIRCUMSTANTIAL. what it means, is that
for cincumstancy, of life, we met, we got to be friend, we had sex, we fall in love, we had children, we stayed together,
but is twis in the other way, too, for cincunstancies of life, we broke, we hate,... what are those circunstancies__???
WE MET IN DUP. THATS ONE....now we can be friend, or enemy.. or lover. you know what i mean.
son ocaciones circunstanciales... A LA MIERDA EL AMOR. i respect you..mean while i will still use love as tool, like they used it with you, with me. and other.
A la mierda el amor,
y todo lo que es "pelusa
y circunstancia "no
Ya voy a hacer que la danza...
i feel you... thats the way it goes. brother like your poem...
love is a beauty that feeds from sadness...
is one of my poem. hope you like it.
nice spanish.
SENA
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Re: Re. A la mierda el amor ...
16th Feb 2016 3:01pm
Mucho Gracias Mi Amigo!
I'm terrible at speaking it (can't roll the R's well enough lol) but I have retained a lil of what I learned from Latino bros. N in school, the rest I just let translator help me out with lol... N yea I will check that piece out ASAP. Peace! :)
I'm terrible at speaking it (can't roll the R's well enough lol) but I have retained a lil of what I learned from Latino bros. N in school, the rest I just let translator help me out with lol... N yea I will check that piece out ASAP. Peace! :)