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You Make Me Feel Comfortable
I'll put you between my legs
keeping you safe and warm
Some night's I want to close my eye's and
lovingly hold you in my breast
Feeling your cool softness press upon my
nakedness
Some night's you tilt my head back just right exposing my neck to the night air
I'll put you back the way I found you
at first light
When I come to bed again I know you'll
be there
I can always count on my pillows
keeping you safe and warm
Some night's I want to close my eye's and
lovingly hold you in my breast
Feeling your cool softness press upon my
nakedness
Some night's you tilt my head back just right exposing my neck to the night air
I'll put you back the way I found you
at first light
When I come to bed again I know you'll
be there
I can always count on my pillows
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Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
6th Jan 2016 4:57am
Tommie, you teach me to appreciate the simple pleasures...that said, I have never been so envious of an inanimate, stuffed object :) Brava!
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Re: Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
6th Jan 2016 3:08pm
I have just come to realize I might be a pillow hoarder! I love those damn thing's. Thank you GW ๐
Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
6th Jan 2016 8:22am
Re: Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
6th Jan 2016 3:12pm
Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
6th Jan 2016 11:14am
If the plea of your immediately previous poem gets answered you won't need them so much!
I like the twist towards the tail, when I (and truth known how many others did) began reading it sounded like what you would do for the man answering that plea!
I like the twist towards the tail, when I (and truth known how many others did) began reading it sounded like what you would do for the man answering that plea!
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Re: Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
6th Jan 2016 3:15pm
I'll always need my pillows SS, can't give them up. Thank you for reading and commenting. ๐
Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
6th Jan 2016 4:56pm
Love the playfulness of the poem...
I have to admit, the punch line got me...
I have to admit, the punch line got me...
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Re: Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
6th Jan 2016 7:29pm
Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
Anonymous
6th Jan 2016 7:58pm
Tommie Lynn,
What.....wait.....cool softness? After this read, leaves me out as your next hoarded pillow. LoL
Enjoyed the twist,
tornado
What.....wait.....cool softness? After this read, leaves me out as your next hoarded pillow. LoL
Enjoyed the twist,
tornado

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Re: Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
6th Jan 2016 8:04pm
Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
7th Jan 2016 5:37am
One of those writes that to me barely fits the category. If we looked hard enough I think we might be surprised about some of the items people "cling" to not related to the presence of another human
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Re: Re. You Make Me Feel Comfortable
7th Jan 2016 1:32pm
I'm not surprised by what people cling to, whatever makes them feel good. Thank you so much Jazz. ๐