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- - - WE FELL LIKE EMBERS - - -
The angels sang with celestial tongues
At her passing by Lord God's eye
And with a courtsy she did pass
To behold Lucifer himself
A seraphim in shining armor
Brighter than the heavenly steps
And then Lord God knew of grief
Anger and jealousy
And with punishment at hand
Lord God smote them from heaven
Brothers and sisters watched in horror
Lord God merely turned his back
As they fell like embers
Burning to the unknown
(c) 2015 Frank Green
Published 23rd Dec 2015
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23rd Dec 2015 1:41pm
Lots of imagery here, Hades--great job! The reader can see this playing out in their mind, short and simplistic.
24th Dec 2015 3:13am
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23rd Dec 2015 7:54pm
No need for an extensive comment; you already know how I feel about pieces such as these...
24th Dec 2015 3:15am
I know, indeed. I always think of these pieces as interludes between the larger poems. So I try to pack as much into them as I can. Thank you, dearest Devil-lyn.
24th Dec 2015 1:09am
24th Dec 2015 3:16am
24th Dec 2015 3:13pm
I can literally see a 'God' just damning celestials to the pits just because he had a case of the green jelly monster.
Once again.. Well written my friend.
Darker.
Once again.. Well written my friend.
Darker.
25th Dec 2015 3:32am
