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Days Go By
Days Go By without your hugs
Days Go By without your love
Days Go By without your kisses
Days Go By and still it's you I'm missing
Days Go By and you're so far
Days Go By since you crashed your car
Days Go by and I still feel you near
Days Go By but how you died to me still isn't clear
Days Go By and I still hear your voice
Days Go By but us staying together was not a choice
Days Go By without your love
Days Go By without your kisses
Days Go By and still it's you I'm missing
Days Go By and you're so far
Days Go By since you crashed your car
Days Go by and I still feel you near
Days Go By but how you died to me still isn't clear
Days Go By and I still hear your voice
Days Go By but us staying together was not a choice
Written by
Justin_Sharples
Published 22nd Dec 2015
| Edited 23rd Dec 2015
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Re. Days Go By
22nd Dec 2015 7:18pm
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23rd Dec 2015 3:04pm
thank you this poem was a poem I made for my aunt who died in a really bad car accident
Re. Days Go By
22nd Dec 2015 9:28pm
Liking the simplicity yet getting your point across. Great job, keep it up! WELCOME TO DU🙋! SURVIVOR➰
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Re. Days Go By
22nd Dec 2015 10:30pm
The title makes me want to start jamming out to the song-- *cue dancing*
But on a serious note, I think it is a nice little poem. It's very clean and crisp.
Thank you for sharing.
But on a serious note, I think it is a nice little poem. It's very clean and crisp.
Thank you for sharing.
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Re. Days Go By
Anonymous
23rd Dec 2015 4:54pm
Welcome to DU Justin!! Excellent write to start us off reading your talent......a sad but beutiuffuly worded piece.....descriptive in emotions.....enjoyed xo :)
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25th Dec 2015 12:14pm
Re. Days Go By
31st Dec 2015 10:58am
Justin, thank you for starting off with your first piece now that you're part of us as a fellow poet. Looking forward to more of what you share with the new year soon upon us. Welcome to DU.
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Anonymous
12th Jan 2016 4:36pm
Wow, that was heartbreaking. I'm sorry for your loss. -YoursTruly
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