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OCD and ADHD make out
Dont touch me with those dirty hands
Hurry up, whats taking you so long?
Dont the colorful lights look pretty?
I have pets.
Im hungry.
Wanna have sex?
You still havent washed your hands?
I need a new bike.
Is the laundry done?
I have lost you, havent I? I get that a lot....
Hurry up, whats taking you so long?
Dont the colorful lights look pretty?
I have pets.
Im hungry.
Wanna have sex?
You still havent washed your hands?
I need a new bike.
Is the laundry done?
I have lost you, havent I? I get that a lot....
Published 21st Dec 2015
| Edited 23rd Dec 2015
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21st Dec 2015 8:11am
Lol, I have ADHD, made me laugh at myself! C'mon over, let's have a laundry party... :)
JJ
JJ
21st Dec 2015 10:08pm
This was a poke fun at myself here. I have them both and PTSD! Forget the laundry lets cook and then do the dishes!
22nd Dec 2015 4:05am
Well, as long as there is eating in between the cooking and dishes... the laundry can wait 'til after breakfast...
21st Dec 2015 8:12am
Wow... I KNOW both conditions
are in fact NO laughing matter....BUT
grant me a laugh or two here plz?
Lol... I love the concept n imagery of how
comical this would be to see acted out
on tv... lol... Well done!!
are in fact NO laughing matter....BUT
grant me a laugh or two here plz?
Lol... I love the concept n imagery of how
comical this would be to see acted out
on tv... lol... Well done!!
21st Dec 2015 10:09pm
I suffer from both as well and PTSD....I have been having a hard time concentrating due to this time of year always makes me nuts. I was poking fun at myself. LOL!<3
21st Dec 2015 3:45pm
I really enjoyed this. Very clever. I think whats best about this is that a rose I see over there?...
21st Dec 2015 10:11pm
A flower by any other name....I was making fun of myself with this one, sugar. LOL.
22nd Dec 2015 00:40am
I like those who can laugh at themselves -
oh, and I like poetry, and this piece seems
to fit the best of both those worlds..:)
oh, and I like poetry, and this piece seems
to fit the best of both those worlds..:)
22nd Dec 2015 4:25am
Thank you my darlin Dartford. <3 I laugh at myselfat least 1000x a day.
22nd Dec 2015 7:01am
23rd Dec 2015 3:28am
