deepundergroundpoetry.com
Him
Classically tailored
Wise in his years
Suited with the right sweetest nothing's to override every fear
Backing with Gods touch and ability to pray for me and with me
How I love him
How I crave to learn to love him in so many different ways so I study .. and will continue to do so
Because no other can compare
I'm in love
Been in love
Falling every day deeper
My husband you are
My summertime bliss
My afternoon delight
My food when I'm hungry
My knowledge when I'm eager to learn
My temple to glide, slide, caress and spill into onto and pour
My best friend
Yeah...
That's all HIM
Wise in his years
Suited with the right sweetest nothing's to override every fear
Backing with Gods touch and ability to pray for me and with me
How I love him
How I crave to learn to love him in so many different ways so I study .. and will continue to do so
Because no other can compare
I'm in love
Been in love
Falling every day deeper
My husband you are
My summertime bliss
My afternoon delight
My food when I'm hungry
My knowledge when I'm eager to learn
My temple to glide, slide, caress and spill into onto and pour
My best friend
Yeah...
That's all HIM
Published 18th Dec 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 9
reading list entries 0
comments 10
reads 910
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
18th Dec 2015 8:28pm
When he is the cause of that extra sway in your hips, or the smile on your face from something he said 3 days ago, when thoughts of him burns your skin, or his voice gives you butterflies, or a scent or song reminds you of him in way that melts your heart,....you know- it's all Him! Love this! I relate to this! I endorse this.... :)
19th Dec 2015 1:02am
Lol I see you know exactly what I mean Rain.. Oh my, when thoughts of him burn your skin( mmmmmm) a burning I'm sure neither of us mind😊😊. I am always so humbled for your positive and kind feedback. I can't thank you enough!! Much love 😘
22nd Dec 2015 12:15pm
Ms. Mocha,
I thoroughly enjoyed this write.
It is wonderful to feel the love and
adoration spill off the page. What a fortunate man he is to have someone see him as you do. I hope the he sees you as the beautiful soul that you are as well.
Keith
I thoroughly enjoyed this write.
It is wonderful to feel the love and
adoration spill off the page. What a fortunate man he is to have someone see him as you do. I hope the he sees you as the beautiful soul that you are as well.
Keith
22nd Dec 2015 4:50pm
Keith,
Thank you so much for understanding the real and truest feelings, but more so acknowledging them as well. A lot of times as adults we tend to say " You know I love you " yet do we really? .. I though of this as I wrote this piece, and just touched the surface of this😊 I thank you so much for your positive feedback, it means everything to me .
Thank you so much for understanding the real and truest feelings, but more so acknowledging them as well. A lot of times as adults we tend to say " You know I love you " yet do we really? .. I though of this as I wrote this piece, and just touched the surface of this😊 I thank you so much for your positive feedback, it means everything to me .
Anonymous
26th Dec 2015 00:16am
this is one beautiful tribute VM..
a lovely way to honor the HIM in your life..
your poetic touch is very exquisite indeed
much repsect
a lovely way to honor the HIM in your life..
your poetic touch is very exquisite indeed
much repsect
28th Dec 2015 6:02am
Thank you so much for leaving such positive feedback Naajir. It means a lot! Much respect and appreciation
😊
😊
2nd Jan 2016 12:44pm
Backing with Gods touch and ability to pray for me and with me
How I love him
How I crave to learn to love him in so many different ways so I study .. and will continue to do so
... I love these lines best.
A fabulous piece for what's surely a wonderful man.
It brings Heather Headley's "He Is" to mind.
How I love him
How I crave to learn to love him in so many different ways so I study .. and will continue to do so
... I love these lines best.
A fabulous piece for what's surely a wonderful man.
It brings Heather Headley's "He Is" to mind.
2nd Jan 2016 12:58pm
Aww!! LabodeSanPedro I humbly thank you for commenting on this piece and leaving such a kind one at that. That song!!! Yes I know it and I love it😊. You know there's a lot we don't have figured out in life so I am persistent with learning new ways to show my love and appreciation. Thank you again !!
3rd Jan 2016 4:01pm
When that intense feeling is in command
it would be wrong not to follow the plan
even the cliches at the end don't seem so bad
that kind of devotion always more then a fad
it would be wrong not to follow the plan
even the cliches at the end don't seem so bad
that kind of devotion always more then a fad
3rd Jan 2016 4:05pm
Hi there Ted,
I genuinely appreciate your positive feedback!
And yes sir ; more than a fad!! I couldn't agree with you more !!
I genuinely appreciate your positive feedback!
And yes sir ; more than a fad!! I couldn't agree with you more !!
