Imbibe thee ink,  or spill me Death

instead,
it's like I'm dead
on the page...

a designer
without the art..

damn bro...

Thanks bro. Yea Damn is right, I don't need to tell you how NOT feeling
the passion to express is akin to dying... Appreciate you much bro. :)

I think Naajir said pretty much everything that needs to be said. Seriously though,those lines were truly poetic. When.I.frst read the post, I felt like I needed to know more about the context, but after I read it a few times, I came to realize that the context is irrelevant. I think the most powerful part of the poems are the lines that Naajir pointed out. The poem begins as an onslaught, as if the narrator is ready to go to battle. Then, rather suddenly, it opens up exposing unmitigated vulnerability. It's kinda of jarring but in a good way. Great write.

You kinda nailed it... The intent WAS to 'rant' n then surrender to the truth
of a need to "release" that ever elusive
"Inner" us... Thanks a bunch, I appreciate your very thoughtful commentary on my ink. :)

*slow clap* This ink packed a mean punch, Rich! I too wowed at the lines naajir mentioned.....

Aaaawww well sweet lady, I'm always
happy when you visit n love when I move you in any manner! :) I thank u kindly n appreciate u always :)

Oh wow...such anger ...seems as though someone truly struck a cord with you...oh how devistating it would be to be a pen without ink to no be able to write such beautiful peices.....nice write

Yea that's very true but hey no worries
I keep plenty of back up pens on hand all the time lol... Thank u my sweetheart, appreciate u much :)

nicely inked

Thank u :)

It is sometimes stated that the death of a relationship is when indifference sets in. Where you playing on the quote by Patrick Henry with the title?

Yea that indifference is a mofo huh?
N I've never  really been good with names but most likely yes lol... Thank u bro. Appreciate u much :)