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Dearest Friend,
I came to you the hour I was in despair, Looking for answers, I cried in pain. I shared many skeletons hiding in my heart. It was then I knew you'd be my friend. I knew it from the start. Troubles ran like river's, flowing thru my life. You picked up the pieces and helped me thru my strife. When home wasn't home to me no more, you unlocked your heart and handed over the key's. We cried past the night until dawn's first light. We soothed each other's pain while sharing our many thorns. As time flew, the air grew foggy. I saw our friendship dissipate, my stomach grew sick. The day had arrived, we should've said goodbye. Now we sit, side by side as stranger's, our future, empty and silent.
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Re. Dearest Friend,
11th Dec 2015 1:37pm
Re. Dearest Friend,
11th Dec 2015 1:54pm
Re: Re. Dearest Friend,
11th Dec 2015 4:22pm
Re. Dearest Friend,
12th Dec 2015 7:10am
I think love dying is one of the saddest things to experience. It's worse than hate, honestly. there is just something so awful about watching something you once believed was amazing turn to nothing... but sometimes, the damage is just too much.
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Re: Re. Dearest Friend,
14th Dec 2015 00:47am
I have to agree! I've seen a lot of sadness, but I think lost love is the saddest😳!
Re. Dearest Friend,
12th Dec 2015 9:09am
there is nothing sadder than the slow lingering death of love, it does however give a writer so much material to work on, so much emotion and pain.
thank you for sharing this one :-)
thank you for sharing this one :-)
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Re: Re. Dearest Friend,
12th Dec 2015 8:49pm
Re: Re. Dearest Friend,
14th Dec 2015 00:54am
Your right, emotional pain does give inspiration, sad but true!😯! Thanx for the feedbackguy's😊!
Re. Dearest Friend,
16th Dec 2015 9:11am
Re: Re. Dearest Friend,
17th Dec 2015 3:26am
True friends are a rarity😕! When you have one, you better hold on tight! Thanx for the feedback!
Re. Dearest Friend,
17th Dec 2015 00:54am
The most painful part about loosing sombody is the thoughts that are associated with that person. The things you shared in common, the reminders throughout my life seporation and death has been the bane of my existence i can relate to this and it take some balls to share that feeling
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Re: Re. Dearest Friend,
17th Dec 2015 3:28am
Thanx for the compliment😉 I'll take that & run with it! It's also the same for me! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Thanx for the feedback!!!
Re. Dearest Friend,
21st Dec 2015 5:57am
Its very difficult to just turn feelings off especially for someone that was a major part of you existence. Love has ben the worst thing and the best thing that has ever happened to me. <3.
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Re: Re. Dearest Friend,
22nd Dec 2015 2:03pm
I don't think you can turn it off. It's a feral emotion to deal with! Thanx for the feedback, always appreciated,➰
Re. Dearest Friend,
3rd Jan 2016 5:41pm
SURVIVOR
Yet when one door closes another opens...Such a heart felt read. Love leaving is never forgotten! Great read!
Truly enjoyed! :)
Yet when one door closes another opens...Such a heart felt read. Love leaving is never forgotten! Great read!
Truly enjoyed! :)
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Re: Re. Dearest Friend,
3rd Jan 2016 6:08pm
Thank you for the compliment, & replying, always most appreciated! To true!,➰