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Paws

Tiny kitten paws
Running tap tap tap across
The linoleum

Written by haikuaholic

Published 1st Dec 2015

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Re. Paws

1st Dec 2015 9:06pm

I really liked the
Onomatopoeic line
Central to this piece

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1st Dec 2015 11:26pm

Thanks!

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Re. Paws

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1st Dec 2015 10:54pm

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1st Dec 2015 11:26pm

Thank you!

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- Edited 25th Sep 2020 3:45am

3rd Dec 2015 3:34pm

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3rd Dec 2015 9:59pm

Of course! I'm glad I could make you smile!

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