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Look at the Stupidity (not a poem) maybe I went too Deep?
So. My boyfriend got a girlfriend.. He told me that my emotions were like a web. I'm skipping a few parts but here goes nothing.
Him: You're emotions are like a spider's web because they spread in all ways and are difficult to get sometimes. Also when you touch certain parts it breaks so you have to fix it.
Me: If my emotions are a spider web, you killed the spider and dusted the web away.
Him: I can make a new one. I'll just get another spider and she'll do all the work.
Me: The spider is dead. It won't be the same because spiders are different. It's like killing a puppy and saying "oh, I'll get you a new one." The difference is that the spider is considered a lesser life so it'll be replaced because compared to the puppy they're insignificant. You get arrested for killing an animal but a bug gets no respect until they're almost extinct... that's when the world is concerned because they killed something that was one nothing so they're trying to make up for it but they didn't care before.
He told me that I was being too deep. Aye, he got the point though.
Him: You're emotions are like a spider's web because they spread in all ways and are difficult to get sometimes. Also when you touch certain parts it breaks so you have to fix it.
Me: If my emotions are a spider web, you killed the spider and dusted the web away.
Him: I can make a new one. I'll just get another spider and she'll do all the work.
Me: The spider is dead. It won't be the same because spiders are different. It's like killing a puppy and saying "oh, I'll get you a new one." The difference is that the spider is considered a lesser life so it'll be replaced because compared to the puppy they're insignificant. You get arrested for killing an animal but a bug gets no respect until they're almost extinct... that's when the world is concerned because they killed something that was one nothing so they're trying to make up for it but they didn't care before.
He told me that I was being too deep. Aye, he got the point though.
Published 25th Nov 2015
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