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11 a.m.
11 a.m.
Each snowflake falling down
Makes me miss each kiss I have with you
That makes my heart pound
As I sit here watching the rain fall
I begin to miss your warm embrace
As the rain falls down my window
Like tears fall down my face
The sound of each rain drop
Slowwly hitting the ground
Reminds me of your soft voice
Oh how I love that sound
Outside,
The wind blows every way
Like every thought of you
Running through my mind
Reminding me how much I miss you
And that I only wish
You could come and stay
But as the wind slows
The clouds begin to clear
And the rain begins to stop
I know you are near
And as everything is settling
And the sun begins to show
The love I have for you
Now only grows
Each snowflake falling down
Makes me miss each kiss I have with you
That makes my heart pound
As I sit here watching the rain fall
I begin to miss your warm embrace
As the rain falls down my window
Like tears fall down my face
The sound of each rain drop
Slowwly hitting the ground
Reminds me of your soft voice
Oh how I love that sound
Outside,
The wind blows every way
Like every thought of you
Running through my mind
Reminding me how much I miss you
And that I only wish
You could come and stay
But as the wind slows
The clouds begin to clear
And the rain begins to stop
I know you are near
And as everything is settling
And the sun begins to show
The love I have for you
Now only grows
Published 18th Jun 2011
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27th Jun 2011 10:32am
I'm so very jealous that you can make rhyming so natural and smooth. Very rarely do I make mine rhyme because I feel constricted but yours seems so effortless!
27th Jun 2011 7:13pm
Sometimes i think i rhyme too much it drives me insane. I love rhyming poems but then I go and read ones that don't always rhyme and wish i could do that..its a gift and a curse lol
28th Jun 2011 2:18am
I suppose it's the whole 'the grass is always greener on the other side' thing. Everyone has their own strengths and weaknessess so it all balances out. :]
