Beguiled

thank you beautiful one for all the love you've shown me and my writes..

you put a big smile on my face with you lovely comments and understanding of this write :)

I love you so much..

xoxoxo Brenda

"our soul's flavors intermingling      
finding my place under your dominion  
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding"  

I am such a guy, but this picture, and the one you provided above, have me and my morning coffee hot!  

thank you most graciously Sir for such a great response to this write :)

love Crim

'Beguiled' by a dominant submissive. . .it's hard to ignore her willingness. . .dark & beautiful, my Queen, as always. . .xo, Devlin.

thank you Queen of Darkness Lady Devlin for such a gracious comment :)

love Brenda

Brenda, oh Brenda.. powerful from start to finish.. you never fail to deliver.. these lines caught my eyes..

confessing my sin      
wanton whore for the powers that be      
     
each had a go to no avail      
you took me there showing me your real face      
revealing my true Master      

and..

our soul's flavors intermingling      
finding my place under your dominion  
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding      
     
thunder struck, stars fell      
I feel the power you posess      

brilliantly done.. like the poetess you are.. into my list it goes.. with love..



Dave

thank you Dave for such a fantastic response to this write :)

love Brenda

the joining of two souls happens infrequently,
so it must be something to treasure.

there is fire & passion in your poetry, Crim...

thank you kindly John though this is more like the fucking of two souls sigh..

love Crim

You had me pinned to my crucifix which reading this, Crim. Heat and your words and reverence in your eyes. And you end with understanding. Beautiful.

thank you graciously DPW for such a fantastic comment :)

love Crim

thank you kindly Gabriel :)

love Crim

Brenda,

Such a lustful write.
Could truly feel the
want and hunger in
words. Such a fortunate
Man.

Keith

thank you Keith for showing love to this write :)

love Brenda

another excellent poem left pounding in my ear and my imagination :-)

Love it :-)

thank you most kindly David for making me smile :)

love Crim

Oh Lady Crim... Amazing write... PLEASE  get Your Poetic chat book together  the world needs to read your work !


XOXO
Fire

thank you lovely Fire for being so supportive and loving to me :)

love Crim

your talent is beguiling even on subjects i've never known...

thank you Dean a better response I couldn't hope for :)

love Crim

"our soul's flavors intermingling        
finding my place under your dominion  
ass in the air as commanded taking a pounding"... - dynamite! Always blown away by your delicate handling of searing imagery! Always a pleasure, - blue angel    

thank you graciously lovely Angel for such a beautiful comment :)

love Crim