deepundergroundpoetry.com
Confused
Like two fish bowls
Of murky water
I stare into your eyes
That angel of disguise
I used to love
But now despise
Because your tongue
Like two knives
Slice through the truth
With nothing but lies
Yet you cry like youre the victim
Like you are laying dead with them
But you're hate's gate keeper
Emotion's grim reaper
That snake in the grass
Bottomless feeder
Frowned upon all because
You convinced yourself you need her
That you freed her
So you plead to her
Got on your knees to her
But she was never there
Yet like the guilty man
Who swore he was innocent
You bet all our lives that she disappeared
But its clear that you're confused
Blame the world for your abuse
Convincing yourself you are always the victim
When the offender of yourself
Was none other than you
Of murky water
I stare into your eyes
That angel of disguise
I used to love
But now despise
Because your tongue
Like two knives
Slice through the truth
With nothing but lies
Yet you cry like youre the victim
Like you are laying dead with them
But you're hate's gate keeper
Emotion's grim reaper
That snake in the grass
Bottomless feeder
Frowned upon all because
You convinced yourself you need her
That you freed her
So you plead to her
Got on your knees to her
But she was never there
Yet like the guilty man
Who swore he was innocent
You bet all our lives that she disappeared
But its clear that you're confused
Blame the world for your abuse
Convincing yourself you are always the victim
When the offender of yourself
Was none other than you
Published 10th Nov 2015
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 5
reading list entries 2
comments 18
reads 883
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
10th Nov 2015 2:10pm
Well that's the kinda self reflection that truly wakes one up! Yea often
we find others to blame n til we realize n face the fact it's us...
we find others to blame n til we realize n face the fact it's us...
12th Nov 2015 10:24pm
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment...i truly do appreciate your feedback !!
11th Nov 2015 4:37am
I love this! I really want to learn how to better my writing in this style, you could teach me a few things!
13th Nov 2015 7:45pm
Thank you.i really enjoy your pieces as well...you have a nice style about you also
11th Nov 2015 9:00pm
5th Dec 2015 4:36am
Anonymous
12th Nov 2015 1:26pm
first off I want to to thank you for your energy on my latest pieces..it's deeply appreciated
now as for this gem..I really enjoy your method of conveyance..rhythmic and full of impact ...
yeah this piece was scathing to say the least..I thoroughly enjoyed
now as for this gem..I really enjoy your method of conveyance..rhythmic and full of impact ...
yeah this piece was scathing to say the least..I thoroughly enjoyed
13th Nov 2015 7:48pm
Thank you for reading and encouraging my writing style!! Your works are amazing i cant help but have energy when I comment 😊
12th Nov 2015 5:18pm
13th Nov 2015 7:48pm
Truly enjoyed this piece, lyricalmiss, since it's profound and ... lyrical. Welcome to DU!
13th Nov 2015 7:44pm
Anonymous
13th Nov 2015 5:54pm
Being truthful to yourself sometimes difficult, must always strive for, brilliant piece.
13th Nov 2015 7:49pm
Thank you for the compliment and taking time to read and respond...i really appreciate it
13th Nov 2015 9:26pm
Just writing it out and laying it bare.
Sometimes it is good, (a lot of times),
to empty the heart and let it breathe.
Very good flowlyricalmiss- Watchman
Sometimes it is good, (a lot of times),
to empty the heart and let it breathe.
Very good flowlyricalmiss- Watchman
13th Nov 2015 10:47pm
23rd Nov 2015 7:28pm
5th Dec 2015 4:38am
