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Luminous
Early the autumn sun sets
As if persued by the moon
Short are November's days
But the cruelest day was June's
In October you turned three
Candles lit; but not to blow out
Tearful the words "Happy birthday"
A memorial for thee
Releasing glowing lanterns
Watching them float away
In our hearts, loves memory
Eluminating the heavens
As if persued by the moon
Short are November's days
But the cruelest day was June's
In October you turned three
Candles lit; but not to blow out
Tearful the words "Happy birthday"
A memorial for thee
Releasing glowing lanterns
Watching them float away
In our hearts, loves memory
Eluminating the heavens
Published 8th Nov 2015
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8th Nov 2015 8:11pm
Luminous is your poem with words that tell of love and pain. And sad it is beyond all bearing.
15th Nov 2015 8:46am
My nephew lost his son this past summer. Found in their pool;he was revived. Twenty-four hours later he lapsed into a coma due to complications and pronounced brain dead.
This write was for me. Just to put it down. Good or bad.
This write was for me. Just to put it down. Good or bad.
12th Mar 2016 7:36pm
25th Mar 2016 7:12pm
Thank you so much. The fact it touched you and you provided feedback really means a lot to me for this write.
Thank you.
Thank you.
