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Would you care
If i was to end it all
End it all tonight
Would you care
Would you wonder why i did this
Would you wonder why it had to be this way
Would you even notice i was gone
Could you say you were happy to know me
Would you be there crying
Saying your goodbyes
Would you care if i just got up and left
Not leaving a trace of where i went
Would anyone look for me
Would anyone wonder what happened
I doubt it
No one cares about me
No one wants me around
No one needs me here
My questions is would you care
But the answer is probably not
Would you care if you found me
Hanging from the ceiling
Just dangling there
Frozen, stiff
Not breathing or moving
Would you care to even want to help me before i reach that point
Again probably not
Im battling this battle by muself
No one around me who cares
You say you do but in the end im all alone
Im there for everyone but when i ned you your gone
So as i lay here wondering if you care
Im slitting my wrists
Crying
And hoping to die
One last time
Would you care
End it all tonight
Would you care
Would you wonder why i did this
Would you wonder why it had to be this way
Would you even notice i was gone
Could you say you were happy to know me
Would you be there crying
Saying your goodbyes
Would you care if i just got up and left
Not leaving a trace of where i went
Would anyone look for me
Would anyone wonder what happened
I doubt it
No one cares about me
No one wants me around
No one needs me here
My questions is would you care
But the answer is probably not
Would you care if you found me
Hanging from the ceiling
Just dangling there
Frozen, stiff
Not breathing or moving
Would you care to even want to help me before i reach that point
Again probably not
Im battling this battle by muself
No one around me who cares
You say you do but in the end im all alone
Im there for everyone but when i ned you your gone
So as i lay here wondering if you care
Im slitting my wrists
Crying
And hoping to die
One last time
Would you care
Published 8th Nov 2015
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9th Nov 2015 2:25am
5th Dec 2015 5:00am
Wow your poem is amazing truly a piece of art and I have one that is simular
If I turned around and walked away, would you notice I'm gone,
Would you even care?
When you look at me, do you see the smile on my face,
Or do you see the tears I fight to hold inside?
Do you see a strong, willful man I portray,
Or the scared little boy who never quite goes away?
If I broke down and lost all control,
Would you know how to handle me,
Would you hold me 'til I stop shaking,
Kiss away all of my tears?
Would you know how to lift me up
From a place far below recognition?
You see a sexy, loving man,
But I'm so much more.
I'm sad,
I'm lonely,
I'm unpredictable,
I'm broken,
I'm irrational,
I'm complicated.
You say you want me,
But you don't even know.
You see who I let you see,
Who I've always let you see,
But what about the real me,
The everyday me,
The boy who never seems to get anything right
The one who could break down at any given moment
And have no clue why.
I try so hard to fight away my doubts
For a while they bury themselves away,
So far away that I think they're gone forever,
But I guess nothing lasts forever,
Because the pain and tears always find their way back to me.
Can you handle me,
Can you handle ALL of me?
Am I worth the time,
Do you really love me enough
To stand by me through all my troubles,
Or am I just too broken for you?
Lol I loved your poem! Whole lot!
If I turned around and walked away, would you notice I'm gone,
Would you even care?
When you look at me, do you see the smile on my face,
Or do you see the tears I fight to hold inside?
Do you see a strong, willful man I portray,
Or the scared little boy who never quite goes away?
If I broke down and lost all control,
Would you know how to handle me,
Would you hold me 'til I stop shaking,
Kiss away all of my tears?
Would you know how to lift me up
From a place far below recognition?
You see a sexy, loving man,
But I'm so much more.
I'm sad,
I'm lonely,
I'm unpredictable,
I'm broken,
I'm irrational,
I'm complicated.
You say you want me,
But you don't even know.
You see who I let you see,
Who I've always let you see,
But what about the real me,
The everyday me,
The boy who never seems to get anything right
The one who could break down at any given moment
And have no clue why.
I try so hard to fight away my doubts
For a while they bury themselves away,
So far away that I think they're gone forever,
But I guess nothing lasts forever,
Because the pain and tears always find their way back to me.
Can you handle me,
Can you handle ALL of me?
Am I worth the time,
Do you really love me enough
To stand by me through all my troubles,
Or am I just too broken for you?
Lol I loved your poem! Whole lot!
29th Apr 2018 6:37am
So sad but yet so honest.I just stumbled upon one of your poems and fell in love...Your poetry is powerful and I felt as if I knew the emotions you were feeling when you wrote this piece I’ve felt them too.Nice write!
