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I SEE YOU
My friend...
You poor,lost soul.
I see you.
The gaze back in the mirror.
Behind your eyes.
Twisting molecules.
Rewiring synapses response.
I see you.
Tongue against blade.
slowly.
I can taste your hate.
Smell your fear.
I vibrate within your anger.
SCREAM!
They don't care.
They don't know you like I know you.
I'll buzz the neon hum.
Prepare you for the war.
Those books you read...
Will be used as kindling.
And I will dance you through the blaze.
My friend.
My shattered,sorrow soul.
I see you-
and you will never ask for your eyes back.
You poor,lost soul.
I see you.
The gaze back in the mirror.
Behind your eyes.
Twisting molecules.
Rewiring synapses response.
I see you.
Tongue against blade.
slowly.
I can taste your hate.
Smell your fear.
I vibrate within your anger.
SCREAM!
They don't care.
They don't know you like I know you.
I'll buzz the neon hum.
Prepare you for the war.
Those books you read...
Will be used as kindling.
And I will dance you through the blaze.
My friend.
My shattered,sorrow soul.
I see you-
and you will never ask for your eyes back.
Published 3rd Nov 2015
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3rd Nov 2015 8:30am
3rd Nov 2015 5:14pm
3rd Nov 2015 5:10pm
My sweet unholies, this is gorgeous JS!
richly dark in promise..my fave & damn near warm n cozy, sez me ;)
"Those books you read...
Will be used as kindling.
And I will dance you through the blaze."
~definitely givin my zippo flicks to this lil perfect..
'delicious deviltry by knowledge'.. comes ta mind at imagery.. most awesome.
"I see you-
and you will never ask for your eyes back"
~ the turmoil, pain, truth, then *this .. just love the wrap up & praisin your pen misters!
spanking metaphors with poetic finesse & that voice of power is strongly detailed..
enjoyed, JS of comfy dark poetry!
~d
richly dark in promise..my fave & damn near warm n cozy, sez me ;)
"Those books you read...
Will be used as kindling.
And I will dance you through the blaze."
~definitely givin my zippo flicks to this lil perfect..
'delicious deviltry by knowledge'.. comes ta mind at imagery.. most awesome.
"I see you-
and you will never ask for your eyes back"
~ the turmoil, pain, truth, then *this .. just love the wrap up & praisin your pen misters!
spanking metaphors with poetic finesse & that voice of power is strongly detailed..
enjoyed, JS of comfy dark poetry!
~d
3rd Nov 2015 5:15pm
always love your feedback Sighs ;)...Thank you again for the connection to my kind of darkness...
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