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Broken
Well, I slipped and fell today,
there was no one to catch me.
My wings were clipped and fell away,
down with soul and dark sky matching.
I think of sins and harsh words spoken,
falling fast with my regret.
When I hit bottom and lay there broken,
I'll pay for deeds I can't forget.
I wish I'd slipped without knowing,
I hope my wrongs don't outlive me.
It's a one way trip where I'm going,
I hope these words help you forgive me.
there was no one to catch me.
My wings were clipped and fell away,
down with soul and dark sky matching.
I think of sins and harsh words spoken,
falling fast with my regret.
When I hit bottom and lay there broken,
I'll pay for deeds I can't forget.
I wish I'd slipped without knowing,
I hope my wrongs don't outlive me.
It's a one way trip where I'm going,
I hope these words help you forgive me.
Published 16th Jun 2011
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16th Jun 2011 9:17pm
17th Jun 2011 4:15am
Anonymous
19th Feb 2012 5:19pm
"I think of sins and harsh words spoken,
falling fast with my regret.
When I hit bottom and lay there broken,
I'll pay for deeds I can't forget."
This was Great :) I enjoyed this read...well done
falling fast with my regret.
When I hit bottom and lay there broken,
I'll pay for deeds I can't forget."
This was Great :) I enjoyed this read...well done
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12th Feb 2013 4:37pm
Mmm, to render a goddess speechless is a treat reserved for gods, but mine today.
