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a somewhat cynical view...
the moon said
he would like
to take her out
one night
she said where
were you thinking
of going
he said oh
I don't know -
around the
world
she said don't
be so bloody
ridiculous...
Published 29th Oct 2015
| Edited 30th Oct 2015
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Anonymous
29th Oct 2015 11:54pm
Talk about "killing the mood". . .this made me laugh, considerably. . .xo, Devlin.
30th Oct 2015 1:10am
30th Oct 2015 2:09am
I never trust anyone who comes out at night but refuses to come out in the daytime :-)
another wee cracker :-)
another wee cracker :-)
30th Oct 2015 10:29pm
what comes out at night
stays out at night...
(I don't even know
what that means..)
stays out at night...
(I don't even know
what that means..)
30th Oct 2015 2:55am
30th Oct 2015 10:30pm
oh, they're like buses -
you miss one and then
three come along
all at once..:)
you miss one and then
three come along
all at once..:)
30th Oct 2015 3:39am
30th Oct 2015 10:32pm
