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Trust
He saw her naked
In her body and her thought *
Violated trust
*Based on Leonard Cohen's 'I'm your man'
In her body and her thought *
Violated trust
*Based on Leonard Cohen's 'I'm your man'
Published 24th Oct 2015
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25th Oct 2015 1:26am
Anonymous
25th Oct 2015 2:35am
OR maybe "she" wanted him to see more than she originally intended for him to see. . .Hmm?. . .Much to ponder on as. . .ahem. . .we women tend to be deceptive when courting the reactions of a man. . .my opinion, anyways. . .Miss Chi. . .an *inspirational* write as well as an observation. . .xo, Devlin.
25th Oct 2015 8:30pm
Things he didn't want to see.
Maybe ...
Wise words spoken, Devlin and John, thank you also for the "pondering"!
Maybe ...
Wise words spoken, Devlin and John, thank you also for the "pondering"!
25th Oct 2015 8:38pm
Well, yes ... or no, it depends :-). Maybe she wanted him to see less and nonetheless revealed too much. Thank you so much, Devlin, for taking your time to ponder this issue ... xoxo
