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Re. Tide of emotions
17th Oct 2015 10:44pm
all washed up...
yes, that sounds
like me..!
your image left me imagining
hearts like jellyfish pulsating
on the sand, which is a little
disconcerting..:)
yes, that sounds
like me..!
your image left me imagining
hearts like jellyfish pulsating
on the sand, which is a little
disconcerting..:)
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Re: Re. Tide of emotions
You SO got it :-)!
Jeez, forgot to thank you for the
jellyfish image! Badang ... badang ...
Jeez, forgot to thank you for the
jellyfish image! Badang ... badang ...
Re. Tide of emotions
17th Oct 2015 10:52pm
Re: Re. Tide of emotions
17th Oct 2015 10:57pm
Re. Tide of emotions
Anonymous
17th Oct 2015 11:11pm
Miss Chi. . .another lovely write. . .but I was thinking sharks & surfers. . .two specimens always desiring to be Kings of heart & emotion. . .Enjoyed. . .xo, Devlin.
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Re: Re. Tide of emotions
17th Oct 2015 11:18pm
Beware of King of Hearts. I like sharks better :-). Thanks for your insightful words :-)!!!
Re. Tide of emotions
17th Oct 2015 11:32pm
Miss Chi, I am fascinated how, with few words, you conjure volumes of thought. Hearts are buoyant and when the tide again rises they'll be riding the waves of emotion pried from the sand by love's gravitational pull.
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Re: Re. Tide of emotions
18th Oct 2015 3:23pm
Oh, thank you so much, Gahddess_Worship, you just created another poem with your pithy words.
I like them!
I like them!
Re. Tide of emotions
18th Oct 2015 1:05am
only desolation left after the violent pounding of the waves.
wondrous poetry, Chi...
wondrous poetry, Chi...
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18th Oct 2015 3:27pm
Re. Tide of emotions
18th Oct 2015 9:21pm
Re: Re. Tide of emotions
18th Oct 2015 9:57pm
Re. Tide of emotions
18th Oct 2015 11:09pm
And what is the nature of that given a last resting place? Does it take another form? Gather somewhere until a collective synergy somehow creates movement? Or does it simply cease to exist totally?
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Re: Re. Tide of emotions
I was thinking of stillness, motionlessness, slow decay ...
Thank you for the questions which make me think, Jazz!
Thank you for the questions which make me think, Jazz!
Re. Tide of emotions
19th Oct 2015 6:44pm
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19th Oct 2015 9:37pm