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Read My Lips
They are calling out to you hun
Can you hear what they are saying
Pink flesh desperate for you
Longing endlessly to be tasted
Tasted by you and you only Sir
Sweet as a Georgia peach
Take a good bite darlin
I see you licking your grin
Ready to dive in deep
I'm in a quiver of anticipation
Please darlin give me some relief
Ahhhhh there you go
You know my weak spot
My body melting into the sheets
Soft satisfaction escaping my mouth
Sighs engulfing us both
As your tongue goes deeper
You grab my hips
Pulling me into you more
Sighs turn to screams
I'm getting closer and closer
One hand begins exploring
OH DEAR GOD!!!!!
Squeals and screams call out
Begging you not to stop
Ahhhhh sweet release
Roll over it's your turn hun
Can you hear what they are saying
Pink flesh desperate for you
Longing endlessly to be tasted
Tasted by you and you only Sir
Sweet as a Georgia peach
Take a good bite darlin
I see you licking your grin
Ready to dive in deep
I'm in a quiver of anticipation
Please darlin give me some relief
Ahhhhh there you go
You know my weak spot
My body melting into the sheets
Soft satisfaction escaping my mouth
Sighs engulfing us both
As your tongue goes deeper
You grab my hips
Pulling me into you more
Sighs turn to screams
I'm getting closer and closer
One hand begins exploring
OH DEAR GOD!!!!!
Squeals and screams call out
Begging you not to stop
Ahhhhh sweet release
Roll over it's your turn hun
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Re. Read My Lips
11th Oct 2015 3:02am
we can read the sexy invitation on your lips, Belle. very arousing poetry...
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Re: Re. Read My Lips
11th Oct 2015 3:57am
Even if I whisper do think I'll still be heard darlin?
Glad u enjoyed reading about my begging n pleading darlin hahaha
Thanx for the read Mr Feddeler
Glad u enjoyed reading about my begging n pleading darlin hahaha
Thanx for the read Mr Feddeler
Re. Read My Lips
11th Oct 2015 8:16am
Re: Re. Read My Lips
14th Oct 2015 5:48pm
I think he does darlin
Its our lil secret to keep tho hahaha
Thanks for the my dear friend
Its our lil secret to keep tho hahaha
Thanks for the my dear friend
Re. Read My Lips
11th Oct 2015 9:41am
Read your lips, feel your heat, hear your screams... Yea, I'm positive anyone would burn with this yearn! lol
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Re: Re. Read My Lips
14th Oct 2015 5:54pm
I'm the one yearning
Needing more and more. This illness is keeping me tucked away tooo too much
Thanks for the read PM
Needing more and more. This illness is keeping me tucked away tooo too much
Thanks for the read PM
Re. Read My Lips
11th Oct 2015 4:44pm
Belle this is a delicious piece filled with awesome titillating images, tastes and fragrances. And your song of ecstasy is beautiful. Bravisima Belle1
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Re: Re. Read My Lips
14th Oct 2015 8:30pm
Re. Read My Lips
11th Oct 2015 9:59pm
I read your lips loud and clear, Belle. This is a marvelous and erotic write that builds well.
"I see you licking your grin
Ready to dive in deep
I'm in a quiver of anticipation
Please darlin give me some relief"
But you're far from selfish:
"Squeals and screams call out
Begging you not to stop
Ahhhhh sweet release
Roll over it's your turn hun"
I love that final line, leaving a 'lil something to the imagination. Beautiful work as always Belle! Into the list for future reference....
"I see you licking your grin
Ready to dive in deep
I'm in a quiver of anticipation
Please darlin give me some relief"
But you're far from selfish:
"Squeals and screams call out
Begging you not to stop
Ahhhhh sweet release
Roll over it's your turn hun"
I love that final line, leaving a 'lil something to the imagination. Beautiful work as always Belle! Into the list for future reference....
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Re: Re. Read My Lips
16th Oct 2015 1:37pm
Oh Crow you leave me blushing. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment
Re. Read My Lips
12th Oct 2015 5:58am
Re: Re. Read My Lips
16th Oct 2015 1:39pm
Well the girl aims to please darlin. Glad to know it hit the spot
Thanks for the read Cobra
Thanks for the read Cobra
Re. Read My Lips
Anonymous
14th Oct 2015 2:42pm
Belle,
Your whispers speak loudly. The juices and flesh of a georgia peach are best savored slowly amd completely after correctly peeling (of course).
Enjoyed!!!
tornado
Your whispers speak loudly. The juices and flesh of a georgia peach are best savored slowly amd completely after correctly peeling (of course).
Enjoyed!!!
tornado

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Re: Re. Read My Lips
16th Oct 2015 1:45pm
Ahhh Mr Tornado I have no doubt you are very experienced when it comes to peeling. (wink)
Thanks for the read hun
Thanks for the read hun
Re. Read My Lips
14th Oct 2015 4:02pm
I love the way this reads, feels vivid and so real as each verse is described in detail... Makes you live the moment.
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Re: Re. Read My Lips
16th Oct 2015 1:47pm
Thank you so much Mr Erotica. I've always felt we don't live n the moment enough
Thanks for the read darlin
Thanks for the read darlin
Re. Read My Lips
18th Oct 2015 11:27am
Fantastic read Ms Belle. That is one extremely fortunate man you have. I hope he realises just how lucky he is. Keep up your writing, I love to read your poems.
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Re: Re. Read My Lips
20th Oct 2015 1:44pm
Oh Guy u so humble me hun. As for how lucky he is well you'd have to ask him.
Thanx so much for the read
Thanx so much for the read
Re. Read My Lips
21st Nov 2024 2:24am