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Sea of death
Drowning in a sea of loneliness, I begin to cry.
Confused by the struggle whether to live or die.
Do I choose to live knowing that inside I'm dead ?
Or give in to the promises death made me instead ?
This lost empty feeling I can't live any longer.
The sea of death I'm swimming
Is so much stronger.
Pulling me under with the lost souls of the sea.
Into the darkness where they've been waiting for me.
Confused by the struggle whether to live or die.
Do I choose to live knowing that inside I'm dead ?
Or give in to the promises death made me instead ?
This lost empty feeling I can't live any longer.
The sea of death I'm swimming
Is so much stronger.
Pulling me under with the lost souls of the sea.
Into the darkness where they've been waiting for me.
Published 2nd Oct 2015
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2nd Oct 2015 6:36pm
2nd Oct 2015 7:13pm
3rd Oct 2015 9:22am
Meh die don't die...It doesn't matter choosing to live just means you're delaying the inevitable. Personally I'd stay alive not knowing what the afterlife has planned and all.
10th Oct 2015 11:02pm
~** <3 **~ With all due respect.... I personally feel it's not suicide you seek my friend. But a F'' escape to cure or heal the mental pain your feeling. Your misunderstood, there's nothing wrong with you. I tried cutting as a child, not to kill myself... but.... I summoned a pleasure I didn't understand at the time!!!!! And that was curing the mental pain I was going through. I wanted the pain to go away without killing myself. Cutting has been a cure for me not a suicide attempt. But.... it could lead to accidental suicide to us and to the Foreiner's report suicide!!! Not fair right???? I feel your pain, and remember... Your Not Alone... even though it may seem that way. ~** <3 **~ Lushviliance Veins
20th Oct 2015 1:28am
Thank u for ur comment. You are so right. Its the pain I want to die not myself. I just wanna live without what's inside me. Having no one to talk to as a kid I remained silent while inside I was screaming for help. Thanks u for understanding.
20th Oct 2015 5:07am
20th Oct 2015 1:02pm
