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Tides - Renku
When cupping your face
pure love and suspiciousness
is what I see there
Excruciated
between emotional tides
our Bay of Fundy
Precarious path
along coastal cliffs so high
catch me if I fall
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Collaboration with applepie77
pure love and suspiciousness
is what I see there
Excruciated
between emotional tides
our Bay of Fundy
Precarious path
along coastal cliffs so high
catch me if I fall
__________________________
Collaboration with applepie77
Published 1st Oct 2015
| Edited 2nd Oct 2015
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2nd Oct 2015 4:15am
dangerous walk, & a lot of trust needed in case of a fall. fine collab...
4th Oct 2015 2:16pm
Emotional tides can be even more pronounced than those of the Bay of Fundy. Utmost caution is required! Kind words, John, thanks ...
2nd Oct 2015 7:55am
I learned the Bay of Fundy has the highest tides in the world; and its' name is not without controversy as well ..
"love and suspiciousness" ... God, do I know this woman.
Does this couple have what it takes to navigate such a treacherous path?
I'd like to think, Yes.
Great collaboration. It stirred me.
"love and suspiciousness" ... God, do I know this woman.
Does this couple have what it takes to navigate such a treacherous path?
I'd like to think, Yes.
Great collaboration. It stirred me.
4th Oct 2015 2:22pm
You're right, Lobo, that's what they say about the Bay of Fundy :-).
We'll hardly know about that since most couples give up before they face the first slight ascents.I'd like to thin yes too...
Thanks so much from both of us for your thoughts and lovely words. xo
We'll hardly know about that since most couples give up before they face the first slight ascents.I'd like to thin yes too...
Thanks so much from both of us for your thoughts and lovely words. xo
