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Why murder when you can torture
Murder is final
A corpse feels no pain, nor sorrow, nor fear, nor regret
To kill means taking away
The fear
The tension
The temptation
The lust of...
The heavy breathing
Gentle sobbing
Heart throbbing
and best of all
The scream
The ear piercing scream
That causes normal people to have bad dreams
But for you the scream encourages you to do more
More cutting
More piercing
More electrifying
More playing
Like a cat with a yarn ball
Sending the victim's mind into a freefall
Just remember...
To feed it
A corpse feels no pain, nor sorrow, nor fear, nor regret
To kill means taking away
The fear
The tension
The temptation
The lust of...
The heavy breathing
Gentle sobbing
Heart throbbing
and best of all
The scream
The ear piercing scream
That causes normal people to have bad dreams
But for you the scream encourages you to do more
More cutting
More piercing
More electrifying
More playing
Like a cat with a yarn ball
Sending the victim's mind into a freefall
Just remember...
To feed it
Published 1st Oct 2015
| Edited 4th Jan 2016
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2nd Oct 2015 00:02am
The first three lines threw me off. I think you are implying that allowing death to come spoils the potential fun that torture promises. But I don't understand line 2 - a body can not be tortured? I think it might more sense if you said a "corpse" or a lifeless body.
After that part I loved where you took this.
After that part I loved where you took this.
2nd Oct 2015 7:09am
2nd Oct 2015 7:14am
For me the is a very logical path here; you go from the general to the specific. The accumulation of pain is a riveting sensation.
