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When you marry, you share your life with someone
When you have children, they share their lives with you
Their ups and downs, highs and lows
All are shared, except maybe a few.
When your kids grow up they share their lives with their buds
When they marry, they continue the loop
Sharing, exchanging, transacting feelings
Editing sorrows and pain, spreading happiness and love
But my system is all flawed, I guess
Because to the world, I want to show my happy side,
Nothing is going on! I am absolutely fine
I hate to share my thoughts, my life
When will I learn how to have a face-to-face fight
Or share my anger or displeasure
Problems I have tonnes
But I really can't share it with my mother
I wish I had a listening doll
I would vent, and push and thrust my horror
but that is being selfish, materialistic, insane
You need a person to share your sorrow.
When you have children, they share their lives with you
Their ups and downs, highs and lows
All are shared, except maybe a few.
When your kids grow up they share their lives with their buds
When they marry, they continue the loop
Sharing, exchanging, transacting feelings
Editing sorrows and pain, spreading happiness and love
But my system is all flawed, I guess
Because to the world, I want to show my happy side,
Nothing is going on! I am absolutely fine
I hate to share my thoughts, my life
When will I learn how to have a face-to-face fight
Or share my anger or displeasure
Problems I have tonnes
But I really can't share it with my mother
I wish I had a listening doll
I would vent, and push and thrust my horror
but that is being selfish, materialistic, insane
You need a person to share your sorrow.
Published 30th Sep 2015
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7th Oct 2015 1:41am
Love this. Honest and brave write,
"Wish I had a listening doll
I would vent, and push and thrust my horror
but that is being selfish, materialistic, insane
You need a person to share yo"
Certainly its wonderful to be able to share with another
But a listening doll is a good thing too
Sometimes you gotta fake it till its real, what is your poetry if not a listening doll
Just saying it out loud to everyone or no one is healthy for the soul
Totally lost as to why that would be materialistic selfish or insane
Therapy often includes puppets, acting out your feelings in role play
With doll is a very healthy thing
Love this line and thoughts expressed about children growing going from sharing with you to their buds
"When will I learn how to have a face-to-face fight "
Practice makes perfect, poetry a great start!
Or, act it out with Barbie!! Lol
Great stuff you make me think
"Wish I had a listening doll
I would vent, and push and thrust my horror
but that is being selfish, materialistic, insane
You need a person to share yo"
Certainly its wonderful to be able to share with another
But a listening doll is a good thing too
Sometimes you gotta fake it till its real, what is your poetry if not a listening doll
Just saying it out loud to everyone or no one is healthy for the soul
Totally lost as to why that would be materialistic selfish or insane
Therapy often includes puppets, acting out your feelings in role play
With doll is a very healthy thing
Love this line and thoughts expressed about children growing going from sharing with you to their buds
"When will I learn how to have a face-to-face fight "
Practice makes perfect, poetry a great start!
Or, act it out with Barbie!! Lol
Great stuff you make me think
