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Disclose
In the gentle time of twilight
Sit beside me and I'll reveal
The secret of my pain:
They claim there is youth in this world-
Where is my youth?
And another secret I will disclose:
My soul has been scorched by a flame;
They claim there is love in this world-
What is love?
Sit beside me and I'll reveal
The secret of my pain:
They claim there is youth in this world-
Where is my youth?
And another secret I will disclose:
My soul has been scorched by a flame;
They claim there is love in this world-
What is love?
Published 29th Sep 2015
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30th Sep 2015 00:04am
welcome to DU, HD...hope you enjoy your stay... :)
i like this...it speaks to me of youth gone in the blink of an eye and the many times burnt by unrequited love...
a suggestion...you don't need the 'and' at the beginning of the second stanza...
i like this...it speaks to me of youth gone in the blink of an eye and the many times burnt by unrequited love...
a suggestion...you don't need the 'and' at the beginning of the second stanza...
