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Shine my Son!
You lit up my life,
Wiped out all my strife!
You brought to me
My childhood back!
Your innocence,
Your sweetness!
Your tenderness,
Made me humble again!
Buddy you're my life,
Buddy you're my joy!
I know you'll forget this, as you grow!
Leave this nest, and off you'll go!
Wherever you go,
Whatever you do,
Son my heart's with you!
Son our hearts are with you!
Wiped out all my strife!
You brought to me
My childhood back!
Your innocence,
Your sweetness!
Your tenderness,
Made me humble again!
Buddy you're my life,
Buddy you're my joy!
I know you'll forget this, as you grow!
Leave this nest, and off you'll go!
Wherever you go,
Whatever you do,
Son my heart's with you!
Son our hearts are with you!
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Re. Shine my Son!
28th Sep 2015 8:09pm
Nicely written my friend... I have never been able to write about my children...
I enjoyed the honesty in this ink
Write on!
Zazzles ")
I enjoyed the honesty in this ink
Write on!
Zazzles ")
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Re: Re. Shine my Son!
28th Sep 2015 8:37pm
:) Thank You Zazzles!
appreciate your kind words! the words came from heart...like any other parent I believe..at the moment am at the crest of life I feel... I feel alive again since his birth 4 year ago!
Thank You once again
Cheers!
KDAmB
appreciate your kind words! the words came from heart...like any other parent I believe..at the moment am at the crest of life I feel... I feel alive again since his birth 4 year ago!
Thank You once again
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Shine my Son!
24th Oct 2015 6:21am
Excellent write! I have only one about my babes. Loved this. Made me smile. <3
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Re: Re. Shine my Son!
24th Oct 2015 6:40am
Thank You MysteriousLady! Your love (mother's that is)madame... is the most beautiful poem in the world and my poem is nothing in comparison. So doesn't matter even if you don write a single word for them and whoever will attempt to write from a mom's view will undoubtedly end up with a beautiful poem..no matter his skills. I appreciate your kind words and visit.
Cheers!
KDAmB :)
Cheers!
KDAmB :)
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Re: Re. Shine my Son!
28th Oct 2015 8:31pm
Thank You Taryn for your heartfelt and kind words. Yes it's absolutely true what you've said...the joy's immeasurable...countless times I feel..I must've done some good to be rewarded with such joy in my life. I appreciate your kind words, time and visiting with me.
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re. Shine my Son!
20th Apr 2016 9:23am
I'm a father to a single child too .. a son .. and your poem touched me. Soon I'll write about my little boy too.
Paul
Paul
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Re: Re. Shine my Son!
21st Apr 2016 10:47pm
Thank You Paul for your visit and yes every little champ deserves one and more... that's great you got a little champ too! Thank you once again!
Cheers!
KDAmB
Cheers!
KDAmB
Re: Re. Shine my Son!
I made a poem for my little champ.. Hope you like it.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/236246-tyr-alexander/
Paul
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/236246-tyr-alexander/
Paul
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Re: Re. Shine my Son!
21st Apr 2016 10:48pm
Re. Shine my Son!
22nd Dec 2016 5:32am
Re: Re. Shine my Son!
22nd Dec 2016 8:18am
And who else would LR better than You!! ☺ ☺
Welcome dear friend! Thanks for the smiles,once again!!
Welcome dear friend! Thanks for the smiles,once again!!