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benched
have you ever been one of
two, so tense you
fucked
just outside of prying eyes?
an office, restroom -
perhaps in a wood?
mine was a dugout; off-
season, of course. she would
lie, brilliant blue eyes blinking
up from the bench. it
creaked when i slid in, and she
groaned when i withdrew, all the
while fearful and
fervent.
but orgasms have a
funny way of suspending you -
holding you
up.
Published 28th Sep 2015
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28th Sep 2015 4:10am
Bam!! Thats hot hot stuff of yum Stag!
"have you ever been one of
two, so tense you
fucked
just outside of prying eyes? "
Great flow and word lay, architecture of it spot on.
And it just gets better after...
Unique erotica, my kinda reads. exited to see what you cum up with next! Check out devils eden on my list, think youd dig...
You earned a spot on my RL!
Best first effort seen down here, and great in its own right.
🚬💋Jennifer
"have you ever been one of
two, so tense you
fucked
just outside of prying eyes? "
Great flow and word lay, architecture of it spot on.
And it just gets better after...
Unique erotica, my kinda reads. exited to see what you cum up with next! Check out devils eden on my list, think youd dig...
You earned a spot on my RL!
Best first effort seen down here, and great in its own right.
🚬💋Jennifer
28th Sep 2015 12:54pm
haha, i'm honored to be a part of your reading list, and i'm so glad to hear you enjoyed this one. based on a true story, nonetheless ;)
Anonymous
28th Sep 2015 4:17pm
Yes indeed, stag, I quite enjoyed the write, and it got me to thinking of the many places I have "fucked just outside of prying eyes." Thank you for giving me the need to remember those days.
28th Sep 2015 4:43pm
not the most comfortable sex, by any means, but certainly some of the hardest to forget. cheers, jerry!
