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I don't know why, but
I was beginning
to think
that she was becoming
bored
whatever
gave you that
idea, she
yawned...
Published 25th Sep 2015
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26th Sep 2015 00:35am
27th Sep 2015 11:24pm
28th Sep 2015 00:55am
I think that was supposed to be "gut" and not "guy". but it could be a guy feeling too...
26th Sep 2015 12:35pm
Hahaha, always rubbing our noses in the every-day life with your great poems. So entertaining, Paul.
Permanent high-lights so to say :-).
Permanent high-lights so to say :-).
27th Sep 2015 11:26pm
I'm afraid that a low life
such as me
has high lights quite
infrequently..!
thank you..:)
such as me
has high lights quite
infrequently..!
thank you..:)
26th Sep 2015 5:43pm
Subtlety......
doesn't seem to be
her specialty...........
( however, it would be difficult--indeed--to find you boring, my Friend! )
I enjoy your ability in permitting us to find humor in even the most ordinary, (sometimes, uncomfortable ) situations!!
doesn't seem to be
her specialty...........
( however, it would be difficult--indeed--to find you boring, my Friend! )
I enjoy your ability in permitting us to find humor in even the most ordinary, (sometimes, uncomfortable ) situations!!
27th Sep 2015 11:28pm
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26th Sep 2015 10:02pm
*OUCH*
27th Sep 2015 11:30pm
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