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Sweet Thang
I wanna be in your presences, around your essences.
Whispering sweet words or affection sessions.
Making you squirm but begging for more.....
In your mind because that ego won't let go of splash....
pop goes the weasel on my ass!
Sweet like your essence,
smooth like my presences (presents),
gifts that keep digging deep into you,
deep like the blue-oceans from
heaven- and wet like them too!
Whispering sweet words or affection sessions.
Making you squirm but begging for more.....
In your mind because that ego won't let go of splash....
pop goes the weasel on my ass!
Sweet like your essence,
smooth like my presences (presents),
gifts that keep digging deep into you,
deep like the blue-oceans from
heaven- and wet like them too!
Published 16th Sep 2015
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16th Sep 2015 9:06am
Mmmmmmmm... Sweet n wet?? How lucky can one guy get!? lol
Gotta love this sexy ass 'sweet thang' you speak of woman lol
Gotta love this sexy ass 'sweet thang' you speak of woman lol
23rd Mar 2024 5:22pm
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This piece evokes a vivid imagery of desire and sensuality through its playful language and vivid metaphors. The juxtaposition of sweetness and intensity adds layers to the expression of passion, while the wordplay adds a playful dimension to the overall tone. The use of metaphors like "pop goes the weasel" and "deep like the blue oceans from heaven" adds depth and richness to the imagery, painting a picture of desire that is both tantalizing and irresistible. Overall, it's a captivating exploration of desire and longing.
This piece evokes a vivid imagery of desire and sensuality through its playful language and vivid metaphors. The juxtaposition of sweetness and intensity adds layers to the expression of passion, while the wordplay adds a playful dimension to the overall tone. The use of metaphors like "pop goes the weasel" and "deep like the blue oceans from heaven" adds depth and richness to the imagery, painting a picture of desire that is both tantalizing and irresistible. Overall, it's a captivating exploration of desire and longing.
