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Her Man?
It was ruined from the start
You never loved her
And thats what ruined it
The first broken heart
For her
For me
Sticking by her side,
Thats what i had to do
I couldn't have those moments to myself
Those precious seconds
That i twirl my hair with my finger
And you smile
Because you were doing that with her
And she was looking at me in discust
For looking at her man.
You never loved her
And thats what ruined it
The first broken heart
For her
For me
Sticking by her side,
Thats what i had to do
I couldn't have those moments to myself
Those precious seconds
That i twirl my hair with my finger
And you smile
Because you were doing that with her
And she was looking at me in discust
For looking at her man.
Published 9th Jun 2011
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15th Jun 2011 11:11pm
15th Jun 2011 11:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Sep 2011 12:52pm
23rd Sep 2011 12:50pm
This is lovely...
Just a question...
"And she was looking at me in discust"
Is this what you meant?
I was just wondering if you might have meant...
"And she was looking at me in disgust"
But a really lovely poem.
Blue Skies
Al
Just a question...
"And she was looking at me in discust"
Is this what you meant?
I was just wondering if you might have meant...
"And she was looking at me in disgust"
But a really lovely poem.
Blue Skies
Al
28th Dec 2012 8:01am
