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only eight inches sonny?
only eight inches sonny?
did u mean 8 inches
as 8 feet
may be a bit too long!!!!
only elephants have
60 inches
and
that's not too long
the she baby lies along
as he washes her tummy
with a bucket full of serum
can't call it semen
thick hard tis
as it flows
into her
swishhhhhhhh...
he swooosshhhhhhhhhhheess
no ahhhhzzz and eeeeeeess
she is pleased
did u mean 8 inches
as 8 feet
may be a bit too long!!!!
only elephants have
60 inches
and
that's not too long
the she baby lies along
as he washes her tummy
with a bucket full of serum
can't call it semen
thick hard tis
as it flows
into her
swishhhhhhhh...
he swooosshhhhhhhhhhheess
no ahhhhzzz and eeeeeeess
she is pleased
Published 31st Aug 2015
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1st Sep 2015 4:35am
This, i like. A lot actually when its here. I just didnt get it at all left on mine. But anyway.....
into her
swishhhhhhhh...
he swooosshhhhhhhhhhheess
no ahhhhzzz and eeeeeeess
she is pleased
Love this...the sounds...the gushhh..a woman cumming, his too...release.
Highly erotic end. The sonny implies she is either older or at least more sexually mature. Then unusual with the elephant, but something about the next phrase, i thought you were speaking, for a moment, about a baby elephant and nurturing mother......interesting and sweet...when realized, the woman has taken her young lover, something intimate and nurturing occurs not just a fuck....and she is pleased.
A unique, satisfying read. Again.
🚬💋J
into her
swishhhhhhhh...
he swooosshhhhhhhhhhheess
no ahhhhzzz and eeeeeeess
she is pleased
Love this...the sounds...the gushhh..a woman cumming, his too...release.
Highly erotic end. The sonny implies she is either older or at least more sexually mature. Then unusual with the elephant, but something about the next phrase, i thought you were speaking, for a moment, about a baby elephant and nurturing mother......interesting and sweet...when realized, the woman has taken her young lover, something intimate and nurturing occurs not just a fuck....and she is pleased.
A unique, satisfying read. Again.
🚬💋J
Anonymous
4th Sep 2015 4:11am
Hey Again.....very clever write.....enjoyed xo :)
4th Sep 2015 6:13pm
Hi flowery
u come to go
like butterflys to flowers
ur like em also
thanks for ur comments
tho'
u come to go
like butterflys to flowers
ur like em also
thanks for ur comments
tho'
