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Haiku
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Haiku
moonlit nights alone
adrift in a sea of stars
memories remain
Written by
Daisy_Kyriss
Published
8th Jun 2011
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haiku's are hard to write
Six-Out
(Jon Rodgers)
9th Jun 2011 6:19am
but you did this one wonderfully.
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Anonymous
13th Jun 2011 00:38am
This isn't really a haiku as it uses metaphor ("a sea of stars") but it's a beautiful senryu. Simple, emotional, true.
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lonleyloser
13th Jun 2011 3:35am
beautiful and simple and just real. nice haiku!
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shadeofgray
(soldier of love)
12th May 2012 5:25am
im a fan of the metaphor and it gose good with the hiku its self
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Anonymous
28th Jul 2014 6:34pm
lovely.
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