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Haiku

moonlit nights alone
adrift in a sea of stars
memories remain

Written by Daisy_Kyriss

Published 8th Jun 2011

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haiku's are hard to write

9th Jun 2011 6:19am

but you did this one wonderfully.

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Anonymous

13th Jun 2011 00:38am

This isn't really a haiku as it uses metaphor ("a sea of stars") but it's a beautiful senryu. Simple, emotional, true.

this is...

13th Jun 2011 3:35am

beautiful and simple and just real. nice haiku!

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12th May 2012 5:25am

im a fan of the metaphor and it gose good with the hiku its self

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Re: Haiku

Anonymous

28th Jul 2014 6:34pm

lovely.