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Tongue
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Should I be polite and ask first
though naughty as I can become
pulling down to show for you
a secret garden in full bloom
pointing at you with sultry eyes
then to my caressing finger
where I want you
as lines of need spoken clearly
so no mistaking
you know the ones I like to say by now
**picture deleted/taken off obviously due to someones over zealous thinking
lol I've seen worse on here
Should I be polite and ask first
though naughty as I can become
pulling down to show for you
a secret garden in full bloom
pointing at you with sultry eyes
then to my caressing finger
where I want you
as lines of need spoken clearly
so no mistaking
you know the ones I like to say by now
**picture deleted/taken off obviously due to someones over zealous thinking
lol I've seen worse on here
Published 26th Aug 2015
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26th Aug 2015 2:05pm
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26th Aug 2015 3:20pm
Pointing at you with sultry eyes
My fav line.
Liked all of it though.
Written with art, against the picture, which is not.
Its lovely, the girl in the picture looks shocked.
Not commanding at all. Took away from this very classy sexy poem.
🚬💋J
My fav line.
Liked all of it though.
Written with art, against the picture, which is not.
Its lovely, the girl in the picture looks shocked.
Not commanding at all. Took away from this very classy sexy poem.
🚬💋J
actually the picture came (excuse the pun) after the write
I'm imagining her expression being one of about to peak
if you get my drift..
though i understand she looks, what with being naked to his clothed rather commanding,
but she's the one who's directing the play onto herself for her own pleasure gain so maybe she is commanding i her own way after all
art comes in many forms :)
love your comments lol don't be put off by mine :)
27th Aug 2015 8:03am
I absolutely am not. Glad you werent put off by mine. It was just such a nice poem. The picture took away from it to me.
But i loved your words.
But i loved your words.
27th Aug 2015 00:44am
27th Aug 2015 5:24am
