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virgin x virgin
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and
the stranger
sighs
here
like a girl
with her first love
as the virgin learns his body scripture
*
and
the stranger
sighs
here
like a girl
with her first love
as the virgin learns his body scripture
*
Published 25th Aug 2015
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25th Aug 2015 00:31am
So thoughtful. Imagining a would be dark hearted man touched and cherrished. Borne again in a girls thighs.
Pretty Shauna
💫J
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25th Aug 2015 00:53am
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25th Aug 2015 5:08pm
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26th Aug 2015 2:04am
1st love, 1st time. discovering the composition of each others form. sublime...
Wonderful piece. The last line is perfection. The artistry in the little flakes, beginning and end; I feel they're significant. Wondrous and delightful.
26th Aug 2015 11:20pm
26th Aug 2015 11:22pm
Merci Pishashee! Your words are making my poetic heart want to write so much more.
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26th Sep 2015 1:25pm
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