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Ass In Sight

He always wants to fuck me � �
Slap me raw in the face � �
He leaves me sitting, crying � �
Until I regain a new pace � �
Then when it's all over, � �
We try to start again � �
I put on a better mask � �
Whilst playing pretend � �
Then he starts to complain � �
Nothing's going right... � �
How do you want it I ask � �
Is my ass better in plain sight?

Written by WanderingWillow

Published 18th Aug 2015 | Edited 10th Mar 2016

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Re. Ass In Sight

Kexby (john rickell)

18th Aug 2015 10:38am

An interesting poem which leaves much to understand although about sex ( not love) the emotions are dull and detatched.the fuck is mechanical.You have imagination I can see from your other poems Thankyou .You are on my list .

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Re. Ass In Sight

Anonymous

18th Aug 2015 1:57pm

Willow, I think this has a depth to it.. Seems to be more about self examinng one's feelings, and worth.. The sex is only a element of what's going on.. I like it, making the reader dig for what the meaning is.. Rather than give it away so easily.. Well done.. Much respect..

Dave