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I want to write with you
Pen in hand
Ulterior motives captive
I need this to happen
Flow off of me
Adding balance and charm
Broad, delicate strokes to put them on
Crisp white paper waiting to be scratched up, pen gliding and
every now and again pressing down leaving slight tears
Write with me
I believe twos comparisons are better
Two views becoming United
Souls somewhat reflecting a piece of the other
Minds working in unison
Pens stroking every pause of thought
Releasing evidence of presence
Im aching for you to
Write with me from scratch
Nice and slow
Eventually time will tell all
and the ink you spill
is what youd like to say
but on paper its sacred....
its safe
so I propose you to
Write with Me
Ulterior motives captive
I need this to happen
Flow off of me
Adding balance and charm
Broad, delicate strokes to put them on
Crisp white paper waiting to be scratched up, pen gliding and
every now and again pressing down leaving slight tears
Write with me
I believe twos comparisons are better
Two views becoming United
Souls somewhat reflecting a piece of the other
Minds working in unison
Pens stroking every pause of thought
Releasing evidence of presence
Im aching for you to
Write with me from scratch
Nice and slow
Eventually time will tell all
and the ink you spill
is what youd like to say
but on paper its sacred....
its safe
so I propose you to
Write with Me
Published 18th Aug 2015
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26th Aug 2015 9:10pm
"Write with me
I believe twos comparisons are better
Two views becoming United
Souls somewhat reflecting a piece of the other
Minds working in unison
Pens stroking every pause of thought
Releasing evidence of presence"
wow what a poetic beauty you created mocha... two minds working together as one... a perfect picture indeed :D
I believe twos comparisons are better
Two views becoming United
Souls somewhat reflecting a piece of the other
Minds working in unison
Pens stroking every pause of thought
Releasing evidence of presence"
wow what a poetic beauty you created mocha... two minds working together as one... a perfect picture indeed :D
31st Aug 2015 11:03am
Magic,
As always I humbly appreciate your feedback and look forward to your comments. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this piece. Sometimes a plus one can bring out the best in you
As always I humbly appreciate your feedback and look forward to your comments. Thank you so much for taking the time to read this piece. Sometimes a plus one can bring out the best in you
28th Aug 2015 00:18am
yearning to be written to be known or to be more of who you are..last verse is esp. sensual.
31st Aug 2015 11:08am
Shauna,
First I'd like to say thank you so so much for taking the time to read my work, and for your feedback as well. Your question makes me think and Im blushing at the thought of that, But to answer Id have to say yearning to be more of who I am😊..
💋
First I'd like to say thank you so so much for taking the time to read my work, and for your feedback as well. Your question makes me think and Im blushing at the thought of that, But to answer Id have to say yearning to be more of who I am😊..
💋
31st Aug 2015 3:33am
I find myself thinking about Neil Diamond's "Play Me". The mind also wonders as to the nature of a shared write, if the result is fit for public view.
31st Aug 2015 11:10am
Neil Diamonds , ahhh!!!
I definitely agree with you there😊
I appreciate you taking the time to read my work, thank you soo much!!
I definitely agree with you there😊
I appreciate you taking the time to read my work, thank you soo much!!
14th Oct 2015 11:24pm
18th Oct 2015 11:11pm
Rhapsodist,
I humbly thank you for your sweet comments,and for your time reading my work.
Im so grateful
I humbly thank you for your sweet comments,and for your time reading my work.
Im so grateful
18th Oct 2015 9:49pm
"Pen in hand
Ulterior motives captive"<--powerful opening lines..
Much enjoy beautiful lady....
Ulterior motives captive"<--powerful opening lines..
Much enjoy beautiful lady....
18th Oct 2015 11:13pm
Rain,
You are totally making my day with these sweet comments. I appreciate you so much gorgoues. Thank youuu💋
You are totally making my day with these sweet comments. I appreciate you so much gorgoues. Thank youuu💋
22nd Aug 2016 2:20am
Spread your wings and like a humming bird tasting the nectar
Of a blossomed sweet rose in the month of May
Filling my passionate cravings to satisfaction
I stroke my pen to write with you while I merge with your
Essence that swallows my being into all your realms
We write not as two but as one flaming spark
Igniting a raging fire that makes our ink crimson red
Melting our readers like magma flowing from a volcano
Flowing into the ocean of endless ecstasy!
Of a blossomed sweet rose in the month of May
Filling my passionate cravings to satisfaction
I stroke my pen to write with you while I merge with your
Essence that swallows my being into all your realms
We write not as two but as one flaming spark
Igniting a raging fire that makes our ink crimson red
Melting our readers like magma flowing from a volcano
Flowing into the ocean of endless ecstasy!
